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killerdoodlebug
2009-10-31 . chapter 22
You know that your not supposed to dedicate a chapter to an a/n, right?
:(
2009-10-30 . chapter 22
noes :(
person
2009-10-29 . chapter 22
you do know Sai is at a jounin level right?
DarcSlayer
2009-09-30 . chapter 1
OH HELL NO!
I've found a good story, I've a found a good story *dances around like an idiot...
Well, one of the ONLY reasons why I'm reading is because...there's Kakashi in it...and TENZO!
Heh - well, it's been a while since you updated...hope you do soon...
DC
Crystalzap
2009-09-22 . chapter 15
will they EVER get him *sigh* i want to know too *cries*
K.N.
2009-09-11 . chapter 20
"He looked at his two teammates, Kuya, a redheaded female..."
Lol... how ironic... in Tagalog, the word "kuya" means "older brother..."
Story's awesome though. Please keep updating!
aisuru Aki
2009-08-05 . chapter 21
UPDATE PLEASE!!

BTW is sasuke in his phase 1, phase 2, or phase 3
kamiam714
2009-08-01 . chapter 21
MOre soon please!
MadnessLover
2009-07-07 . chapter 21
Great story.
YumeTakato
2009-07-05 . chapter 21
Interesting chapter. See you next time!
Hypnotized Angel
2009-07-05 . chapter 21
MUA HA HA HA!FIGHT TO THE DEATH YOU LITTLE MUNCHKINS!
HH
2009-07-04 . chapter 21
My only complaint would be more Kakashi! But that's just because I'm a big Kakashi fan. This story is pretty fun and I'm wondering how it will develop.
DarkRavie
2009-07-04 . chapter 21
Very good chapter. I look forward to reading more of your fic.
nequam-tenshi
2009-07-04 . chapter 21
great chapter! but make sure that Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke don't reveal to many of the signature justu of their sensai because they're suppose to be blending in!

where's Iruka?
Kakashifangirlnumber1000
2009-07-04 . chapter 21
Loved it.Please update soon again.
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