Damned amazing...

Intense, very intense. Or maybe that's just me. I find corrupt, powerful pharmaceutical companies to be scary ever since Capcom came out with Resident Evil, lol.

But gosh I want to know what happens next! I'm so afraid for Riku! x0 I just know something happened to him. Has Ansem developed his disease enough that he can control Riku? My gosh the tension!

And I'm nervous for Kairi and Nami too.
You have great story-telling skills, I'm seriously on the edge of my seat.

That being said, I'll eagerly await your update. I may even create an account just so I can put this on alert.

dude... dude. and update is so freakin' vital right now!

im hooked, and its only chapter FOUR. this is the awsomest freaky medical story ive read and i NEED to know what happens next! its killing me!!

ooh, snap. yeah... snap.
okay, so, this has me completely hooked. its so amazing, and i truly cant wait to read more.

asdfjkl. woah. now that i think about it, the whole one two/ axel sora thing should have been more obvious, but i'm just a tiny bit oblivious. just WOW. i wish i had more words to describe how AMAZINGLY AWESOME you are. i only noticed one teensy lil thing, you skipped from august 10th, 2123 to august 11th, 2132.

gosh. it kills me everytime i think about how creative you are!

You know, I usually hate conspiracy, domination plans, disease ravage and all that stuff.
So I was shocked when I liked this story so much. It's probably because it's Sora and Axel instead of Riku and Roxas who are the ones with the disease. I just thought it would make sense for Roxas to be curled up in a ball and Riku to be one passing on information he's being constantly punished for.
Not that I have any objections to Axel affected all like that and imagining Sora with flat, Heartless-like eyes, I mean they're perfectly fine that way, and...
I'm showing my sadistic side, aren't I? So sorry.
Back on top, you portray Axel to his full potential, both on the drug and off. It's terribly hard to imagine being able to write Axel's 'crazy section' parts and still keep him Axel-y yet still terribly insane.
Oh dear, I'm rambling. Again, so sorry.
Right, so I look forward to an update or two in the future. Until then, I'll preoccupy myself with some of your other works.
Who knows, I might turn up reviewing something else.

Man, I love this story. I really do. It has a really great plot line and it's really well writen, I just love it. You're really an amazing writer, one of my favorites on this site. Infact, my favorites list only consists of you and the.israel.project107.
But I've read all of your fics and I want you to know that all of them are AMAZING, and please forgive me for not reviewing every single one.
And I'm really looking forward to any updates to come, for all of your stories.
You really are a great writer.

Gah... I feel bad it took me so long to get to reading this! I love conspiracy stuff, and this is just awesome. Roxas is a smart little guy, isn't he? XD

So... I just spent the last week reading everything you've written on this account. It would seem that I am a stalker, but the truth is that I have no life and you're an extremely talented writer. SYNthetic is my favorite of your stories, so I very much hope that you'll be updating it again... soon. I know how writing goes, though. I just hope you haven't given up on it.
In any case, I love reading your work and you've inspired me to break into my own account, which I have been unable to get on in... three years.
Have a happy New Year.
--Drisowen

This fic is really fascinating. I love your premise and I'm really enjoying your characterisation. It's definitely a unique story, unlike anything else I've read for the ship, and I look forward to future updates from you. ^^

Oh my gosh, why, why, WHY haven't I read this before? Please update soon, I'll die of suspense! @_@

This is such a fascinating story! I feel so awful for Axel and Sora... I can't wait for more information from Namine. The situation almost makes me sick - what an awful way to be silenced. Amazing writing, amazing... ah. I wish this were a more coherent review. I hope that you write more soon! Good luck with everything!

OMIGAH OMIGAH OMIGAH OMIGAH OMIGAH THIS IS SO GOD! XD *dies*

OMG you would not believe how many times I gasped while reading this.
I was all like le shock!
anyways,
I'm eagerly awaiting your next chapter.

Love,
Faye Silo

o_o

My brain... it hurts.

I think I need some coffee.

I also need to go, and rewrite down everything that has happened, and make little lines to connect it in my brain. O_O

Why is it, that so many people enjoy the mental/physical sickness of either Axel, Roxas, or both?

you have so many good ideas for plot lines! i really like this story so far and i am excited for the next update

God poor Axel. I don't even know what to say :/. It sucks to have brain issues. Ug. i know first hand. And why do I get the feeling one of the main characters is gonna die? XD Well You did wonderful job on this chapter, Very superb! And it gives me a reason not to trust doctors anymore XDD

~IPUB