are you ever going to put up the next part of this?

Oh PLEASE add another chapter! :D But Danny and that girl, May, was it? It just didn't seem like him...

Biia

Wow! I don't know what to say about this, it has brought forth some pretty heavy emotions.

Congratulations, usually I don't feel emotions that strongly when reading, but this 'extend one shot' takes the cake. Although I really want to punch Danny in the face, I'll remain calm. *breath in, breathe out* Overall, I really like this piece of yours, very much.

You are making a part two right, RIGHT? Because I think this story got MAJOR potential.

Wow. Interesting. Wish the ending was happier (wistful smile) but great writing. I can see how everything could go so, so wrong even after Phantom Planet.

Thanks for writing!

Oh my gosh..THIS is what I call a story...loved it! can't beleive Danny did that to Sam though..well guys will be guys...

anyway...this is on my favs _ LOL

i admit, the long oneshots are not easy, but this is good. i can't wait to see what comes next, though i know i must.

cd

*gapes* WOW...That was amazing...poor Danny and poor Sam!

I have a theory about your story...well i say theory I mean a thing that i think may happen...and thats the GIW told that *takes deep breath to control anger* May...girl to sleep with Danny so that he could (hopefully) get her pregnant and then they wouldnt need him as much because they would have a part ghost of their own who wouldnt have any sort of attachments to anyone...and when I say part ghost I mean like...a quarter ghost of sorts, I dont belive it would be half ghost as danny is half ghost and the child would only take on half of their fathers DNA.

Anyway, just a thought.

I could be wrong. It is your story after all.

A story that i LOVE by the way.

Totally cool.

Cant wait for Part 2!

And the next chapter of 'The House'!

Wow...long review!

Pc

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They broke him. They purposefully broke him so he'd do what they wanted...

That's just sick.

I really love this. All of your work is awesome! I feel sorry for Danny, though. The GIw really did set him up, and Danny just went along with it. Poor Danny. Take your time updating. I want to see the next chapter of the House soon too. :D I love that one a lot. I also want you to update this one, and that other one you had...whoes name escapes me. You probably know what one I'm talking about. :D

Sucks to be him! I'd hate it if my parents "abandoned" me like that. They did sort of let him go though I'm not so sure it was their fault entirely. Circumstances certainly did push them in that direction though. Personally, I think if Danny had been a little more vocal about his dislike for tests things would have gone differently. The media is another problem. Something needed to be done about that, something other than a "tour". And the GIW tests, Danny shouldn't have complied to any of them or at least he should have forced them to sign a contract saying that they could take perform tests on him that did not physically, mentally, or emotionally harm him. That would have made things better.

Anyway, great job and please update soon! This is great!