Yeah you should make a sequal

YES SEQUEL PLEASE.

great job. this is one of my favoite movies. The birthday party is one of my favorite

I Absolutely Loved This. I Know It's Been Forever Since You Updated But I Was Just Browsing And This One Caught My Eye. Nice Work. :)

Please cont. it. loved what i have read so far.

i love this story great job!

hope theres more love this story great work

I think you could add to this. A little creativity goes a long way. But you're right it could be seen as a decent ending spot. I would prefer to see more though. Like maybe Eliza coming home and going on from there. But's its your story, your call. You do what feels best.

Much Love,

Santiva Potter

Nice to see that you continue this story after so much time. I think you could definitly make a sequel. I love reading SWAT fanfic, and there's not enough in here.

Good job!

Ahh, very nice Glad to see you updated. Nice to see a bit of T.J. stuff in the beginning XD. I think you should definitely write more*nodnod*

Btw, it's T.J. McCabe. No 'K' ;)

Hey this is a good story hope you finish it soon

I like this so far, continue soon please ;)

i know its been years but i love this! could u update?

Ah, I love Jim and Chris together. Glad that there is someone writing stories for them so their connection can live on . . . hope to see the next chapter or two (and more) posted soon.

I love Chris and Jim fan fiction. Your off to a great start. I look forward to reading more. Hopefully soon.