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| gillian 2008-10-03 ch 26, anon. | abusereally great story, i am no critic, but loved reading it! cant wait to read more, i read the whole thing last night and am addicted! love it! write more soon! I am sorry , i cant even think of any improvements, like i said, i am no critic! just love reading GSR! thanks! |
| mcsip3 2008-10-03 ch 26,  | abuseThis is a great Story. Are you going to write more. I hope so. |
| sarauk56 2008-09-26 ch 26, anon. | abuseJust read from the begining, absolutely brilliant!, please,please,continue with next chapters.. |
| WhiteWingeDove 2008-09-18 ch 26, | abuseWow...what can I say? That was definitely sexy and hot, but also passionate and romantic. Personally I don't think it seemed like Grissom was taking advantage of Sara. There was way too much geek love in the air for it to be like that. And having Sara question whether or not they were having problems before was a great way to get Grissom to forget about the rules and consequences. "For better or for worse, right or wrong, she was his tonight and he was hers." That was an awesome line. I also loved how you ended the chapter. "He bent his head to kiss her temple and whispered a soft, 'I love you,' but she had already fallen asleep." That was so sweet! I so cannot wait to read more. I know it will probably get stressful when the truth is revealed, but this story is addictive. I can't wait to see what happens next ;-) |
| catysmom 2008-09-17 ch 26, | abuseI like it. Please update soon. |
| csifan2694 2008-09-17 ch 26, | abuseawesome chaoter! please, please update soon! |
| NayNay72894 2008-09-16 ch 26, | abusewell I tink the chapter turned out FANTASTIC I can't wait for more. |
| spike4anna 2008-09-16 ch 26, | abuseThat was so beautifully written. Great job. I'm just worried of what hell will brake lose once Sara's memory comes back. |
| Gilbertgal7 2008-09-14 ch 26, | abuseI like them getting together in this chapter. The angst will some soon enough. Anxious to see where you will go with this. I wish you posted regularly, m/b for the future chapters. I've been enjoying this story because it's well written ( as well as gramatically & spelling being correct within reason). Hope you post sooner. K |
| GSR-CSI-FAN 2008-09-07 ch 26, | abuseAw finally their first time together and i loved the last bit when he told her he loved her but she was asleep. Can't wait to read more!! Please update soon xx |
| Sara Abigail 2008-09-07 ch 26, | abusethat was an amazing chapter! loved it! can't wait for more!! |
| KimCSI 2008-09-06 ch 26, | abuseAww what a chapter!! I knew they would sleep together before Sara regained her memory. The fallout will certainly be interesting! Eagerly awaiting more :D |
| gsrcrazy4greg 2008-09-04 ch 26, | abuseGreat chapter! Cannot wait for the next one! |
| CSIlover123 2008-09-04 ch 26, | abuseThat was a brilliant chapter. I'm glad your back. |
| msbetty 2008-09-04 ch 26, | abuseTHE HELL WITH HER MEMORY, ABOUT TIME THEY GOT TOGETHER. |