oh i just love this story i saw it some time back then my computer died and i just now found it again and reading it for the second time is just as good as the first i hope you will up date soon
this is one of the best AxelxRoxas i have ever read and i just love this story so much please keep up the good work

Now I got to this "end" (thet I hope is not the definitive one) I'll review agian as a boss for you to move on :P.

Don't let us down here ^^

I had to review this fic just to say "dont give up". You got a god thing here. I hope you go on with it, cause I'd really like to read this until its end.

Aggh.! Too good, brain melting! @_@ I love your way of portraying the KH boys and can't wait to see what comes next.

This is really good so far, I'm anxious to read more! Poor Roxy!!

this is a really sweet story, and i cant wait to see the rest! C=

I just love this story... What really is attractive about it is the way you depicted Roxas - he has such an original character! Axel also... and Namine. Marluxia, let's admit it, was the pervert I expected him to be, but that's why we love him, right?! Zexion... don't really have much to say about him, only that I'm really curious about what he did to earn Axel's anger. then...

'But then again, Roxas thought, it’s hard to tell anyone about the painful things in life.'

I just can't wait to know more about Axel!

Keep up the good work!

P.S. I notice you spelt 'personal' the wrong way - 'personnel'. Like in:

'He didn’t want to go partying since he wasn’t exactly okay with everyone being in his PERSONNEL space.'

It should be:

'He didn’t want to go partying since he wasn’t exactly okay with everyone being in his PERSONAL space.'

;) Hope I helped you and didnt bother u with my review XD

Hmm...Having my way with Riku for a review...I think I'll pass on that, but I'll still review. :]
I like your story line so far. AND ROXAS IS JUST THE CUTEST LITTLE THING IN THE HISTORY OF EVER, OHMYGOSH I JUST WANT TO SQUEEZE HIM AND NEVER LET GO. But I don't want to make him uncomfortable...

Axel leaned forward and gave Roxas a small kiss on the forehead. Roxas felt his cheeks burn red.

THAT WAS SO ADORABLE, **Squeels!**
I love you! x3
Can't wait for an update! ;D
Much love
Lyra

*hugs you* NEW CHAPTER! YAY! *celebrates* Okay, I'm making a new chapter to Addiction now! lol. You gotta write more to your other stories too. I like them all! ^_^ Write more soon!

aw hahha poor Riku~ >< but dude hahah i do like this sotry *nods* Axel ish soo jealous heheheh~ ♥ cant wait for the next chapter~

Hahaha
Holy crap.

Marluxia is the awesomeness. He Rox my sockies man.Can't wait for the next chapter XD

WONDERFUL!

I adore this fic to a fault. The fact that you actually took time to set up a legitimate plot unlike many authors was brilliant. Also, you didnt quite follow the steriotypacal personalities for the characters, making them more human.

Ill be eagerly anticipating the next chapter, and I know that unfortunatly a lot of readers are too lazy to review, so i hope this can at least make up for some of them and help you get motivated and posting more chapters for your fantastic story.

Oh no!
What shall happen next?!

This is so good. Can't wait for the next installment XD

But Roxas had always liked pickles. So maybe it wasn’t a pickle but rather another fruit…or were pickles vegetables...?

He had never really liked pears. So pears it was. He was stuck in a bit of a pear.

A really long, hard, utterly gross…pear.

Wow, how amazing-- just a few lines and it's making me want to read all the more. I can't believe his cousin.

You're writing is so enjoyable my dear :P

*hugs you* It's so cute! Please write more! I rock, huh? Yay. *dances to Numa Numa, even tho she HATES it* Happy happy. But this chapter was so cute, I laughed a lot. ^_^ Poor Roxas, gonna have his heart broken! But Axel will save him!
*favs like, 80 times*