cute!! loved it n.n

Aw! well done, and very sweet.

LOL - how proud he must've looked, befouled and smelly yet succeeded in getting the medicine for Rin! Wonderful!!
And that bath scene, LOL! Poo Sess, no privacy at all... and I liked how you conveyed Osuwari without ever mentioning it.

The ending was of course - perfect. Nothing is too much for Rin - nothing!
Oh dear... and now the story's done... write another please!

Wow, awesome! You don't write explicitly about the fight, Sess' rage, the transformation - but it's there. It's ALL there. Good job!

Just re-reading all chapters before I enjoy the new Chap4!
Just by a few words, you've conveyed the fact that Sesshoumaru is greatly concerned with Rin's health - way to go!
Oh, and... *rummages in bag for a large band aid to tape up Jaken's mouth* ahh... better!

Kawaii! Thanks for sharing!

This has got to be one of the cutest father/daughter SessRin fics that I've read. Of course, Fluffy-sama is a teeny bit out of character...but that's okay. He's much better this way.

Haha cool end on the last chappie

Wow - Sesshoumaru is COOL!! And you made him so, but now I wanna see him get back to his Rin and make her all better so please write more!

I love It O_O

awesome so far! update soon please!

OOH!! There's a third chapter, right?! I hope so!! :D This story rules!! :)

Oh my.

Update soon! o.o

one of the few people that keep sesshomaru in charecter i look forward to the next chapter

I really enjoy your writing style. so much imagery and creative word use. "the smell of decay" coming from rin's mouth. whoa o__o that sounded SO discomforting, yet i had never read it before, which made it wow-ing and doubly discomforting ^^;

also, how sesshoumaru expressed just the "slightest pull of muscle", yet it was equivalent to a murderous scream from other youkai, according to jaken. now that's poetry (and keeping characters tremendously in character, while informing the reader on the meaning of that "slightest pull of muscle"). I give you an A+ on all that.

I hope this is a chapter-length fanfic o__o too good to leave as a oneshot (though its tremendously good this way, if it were to be left as a oneshot).

Aw...Li'l Rinny's sick! *Cris* So...sad! Baka! Baka, baka, baka, bakax10!