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Ah, you're back! It's been a dull and unfulfilling search for good fanfiction without your work. ^_^

But all cheeriness aside, this was very... sad. Absolutely wonderfully written, of course. But it kind of makes me want to cry. ;-; Sasuke's such a bastard.

I like your use of weather, by the way. Usually in fanfiction I read, if it's angsty, it's raining or just dark or something. The thought of a day that's so uncomfortable really adds to the intensity of Naruto's feelings.

Another piece of art. You really get their relationship, they remain in character in all your fics (well, the serious ones, anyway... :D), and for that, my friend, I amire you greatly.

Although that is a remarkably full and satisfying oneshot, remarkable for its size and the fact that im unbothered that theres no (sort of) happy ending (so unlike me, be complimented =p), I would definately like to see more of this, not because of the above preference for sortofhappyendings but because I can just feel a good, angry, tense and fustration fueled story coming, with Naruto and Sasukes stubborness-ness at war...I love those.

Wow, that was amazing! You captured Naruto and Sasuke so perfectly even in that short piece of writing. I love your work, I wish I'd found your fics sooner, but heck I'll start reviewing them all from now on ^.^

I really love the simple deepness of that.

*laughs* I could almost feel the tension in the air.

Great job. I will be looking forward if you wish to expand it.

I've been avoiding working on my own fics before I fill them with crappy crap that makes me want to strangle myself, and have taken to writing one shots based on random ideas.

I like this short piece of simple Sasuke and Naruto interaction. I'd read it if you extended upon it, I'd still love it if you didn't.

--Crow (sinners)