 cryurname 2008-09-05 . chapter 31Great story! You write all of the characters so well! Even the side characters, like Matt and Sebastian, are true to form. Keep up the good work :) |
 Brian2008 2008-09-03 . chapter 31I liked how you brought Max and Logan back together in chapters 28-31. I think the story might have started to drag if the search took much longer. Max's leap from one truck to another and Logan's firing a shot at her were very dramatic. After four months apart, the reunion was very touching. Also, the story continues to be interesting. I'm looking forward to reading how Max and Logan deal with the villains and reunite with Eva. I'm also wondering if Alex is going to get his due recognition from Max and Logan. |
 jiakechong 2008-09-01 . chapter 31HAPPY TO SEE THEM FINAL GET TOGITHER!
LOVE IT! |
 annie200 2008-08-31 . chapter 31 Loved it! |
 Brina2468 2008-08-30 . chapter 31 Yah! Max and Logan got together! Cant wait for more! |
 Brian2008 2008-08-21 . chapter 27This is one of my favorite ongoing Dark Angel fanfics. In Chapter 27, I liked how you showed Max's growing worry and frustration through her quarrel with Alex. |
 jiakechong 2008-08-21 . chapter 27Can I ask more...
Great story! |
 annie200 2008-08-20 . chapter 27Updates, hurrah! Poor Alec, and he's trying to do the right thing too. More chapters soon please. |
 ion bond 2008-08-20 . chapter 27TOO SHORT!
Sorry to be ingracious -- the last chapter was awesome! I love your Alec, and I loved Sebastian "shouting" at him. I can see where both he and Max are coming from in this scene, so their fight kind of hurts to read.
It's great to read a DA story with plot. Please keep 'em coming. |
 mbracha 2008-08-20 . chapter 27Thanks for updating. Looking forward to what happens next. |
 GloriaS 2008-07-08 . chapter 24love your story will be waiting for more |
 jiakechong 2008-06-18 . chapter 24Love the story!
Please don't let us waiting too long... |
 Babyangel86 2008-06-12 . chapter 24lol! I guess fate is really is on his side!
hoping for more updates soon!
excellent job |
 Ion Bond 2008-06-09 . chapter 21 My favorite things about this story are how distinctly it's placed in Seattle and how clearly you imagine the post-Pulse city. I really enjoyed this chapter. |
 Jeanetteg 2008-06-06 . chapter 24you put Logan through he.. but I guess the tribute to him made him see it was worth it. Will he contact someone soon? Did he not get a cell phone from the scumbag?
Or does Alec and Max catch up to him soon? |