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Whatever07
2008-09-11 . chapter 4
Update soon!
Love- it!!
Ja!!
little nobody's girl
2008-06-30 . chapter 1
yay
EzMouse
2008-06-29 . chapter 4
Twen. It's me, your tween! xD
Sorry, I got too lazy to sign in so yeah, anonymous!
Anyways, I WUV this story to bits!
It's been, what? SIX months since you updated this story!!
You should really update like... NOW!
This is one of the most unique and awesome-est stories I've ever read! I still wanna know how Mikan will hate Natsume!
I thought he was already gonna hate him with all those mean things he blurted out.
But, oh well! Please, you should update!!
Update! Update! Update!
Pwease, for your little tween? -puppy do eyes-
>.
An Identified Nobody
2008-06-03 . chapter 1
oh my... i never knew mikan will act this way... it is hilarious... well, who wouldnt?... but i wont be like that if ever natsume really exist because he's just a person not a god... i admit now that mikan is really stupid... LOL. upload soon 'cause i wanna know what's next... good luck! :D
StarAngel02
2008-04-03 . chapter 4
okay this a really nice fic...plz plz update a.s.a.p. :)
lovelyeddie
2008-03-08 . chapter 1
Great story so far!

Natsume's so weird, but I love him!
love2jj2bluegurl96
2008-01-04 . chapter 2
i like it
natsumexxmikan i wonder how they get together lol
applepiemina
2007-12-31 . chapter 1
im screaming like mikan...ah
Soulie
2007-12-31 . chapter 4
wow.. that was funny, you did a very excellent job... i loved the way how you portrayed natsume and mikan's reactions.. lol, they're so funny, considering that the whole chapter consists of their POVs...
i give you 10 /10 for this one!

pls. update soon!
The Chocolate Tempter
2007-12-30 . chapter 4
KYA~

OMG! YOUR PLOT IS SO MAKING ME FREAKING CRA-ZZY!

I love this chapter!

I was laughing like a mad cow reading this lot! hahaha! omg. i call myself a mad cow. T_T

anyways, i am happy that i recieved replies from u. thanks^^

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE

I realy need to know what happen next--BADLY!!

GOOD JOB ON YOUR BRILLIANT WRITING AND SUPER DUPER PLOT! YOU'RE GREAT!

sarahpatrick^^
'Blue Moon and Roses'
2007-12-30 . chapter 4
hahahahaha!
I love this chappie!
LOL!
I can't believe she didn't feel embarassed by her outburst!
she acts like Permy!
hahahaaha!
you could say she is Natsume's deranged fan!
hahahaha!
LOVE IT!
UPLOAD SOON!!
;P
Mistress Symphony
2007-12-29 . chapter 4
Ahem. Don't worry. I wasn't offended about the clown thingy. It was actually.. uh.. amusing. Anyway, nice chappie. About your "request" to spot mistakes. I happened to see one: "An old geezer, who I haven’t seen before, and Rosy, another cow, descended."
If i am not mistaken, it should be: "An old geezer, whom I haven't seen before..." :)

Again, nice chapter and I'll be waiting eagerly for Mikan's new display of lolita outfits! XD
Neko246
2007-12-29 . chapter 4
whoa... Mikan is UBER scary XD it's weird >.< she's so obsessed with him hahahahaha I can't believe she thought that at first hehehe

Update soon!
pressthebutton
2007-12-27 . chapter 3
Please update SOON! it's a great story!
megumi natsuyama
2007-12-26 . chapter 3
kya!!
and so they met!!
yipe!!
more, more, more!!
ne, i like your story!!
a lot!
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