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| TemariS 2008-07-04 ch 2,  | abuseOMG! that's it? lame... just joking. the sroy was great. |
| Uber Hyper Sugar Fiend 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuse"The only thing recognizable on them were their hitai-ate." When I read that, my heart just stopped... |
| Corkyspaniel 2008-05-12 ch 2, | abuseThat was a beautiful fanfiction. Without taking the characters OOC, you created a mood that would make even Neji cry. :D I can think of no constructive criticism excpt for a few minor spelling errors, so keep up the awesome work! You have a gift. P.S.-I love how Neji was portrayed in this...very few can capture his essence like this. |
| Nightshadow Dweller 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuseThis was really beutifull |
| Mrs Hatake Itachi 2008-04-08 ch 2, | abuseNice story! |
| prluvr365 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abuseAww. Well, I get how Lee and Gai died but, what happened between Neji and Tenten before this? Hmm... Well, I can't wait 'till I hear more from you! Ja Ne: ~!*Prluvr365*!~ |
| xmarachanx 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abuse-cries- aw! you have the most amazing grammar ever. I adore it. ^_^ you're a great author, I loved this epilogue, very nice. keep up the good work, you're great! ^^ |
| Sirena-Lune 2008-03-20 ch 2, | abuseThis was so bittersweet and lovely. I love the way you expressed the depth of their grief without being overly sentimental or cheesy about it, and how you showed that the end of something beautiful started something else, at last. |
| CrazyGirlofManyNames 2008-03-20 ch 2, | abuseAw sad and bittersweet! |
| princesse17hime 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseIt was so... :') |
| Gehenna - Soboku Koikawa 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseMe sad, but me likes. Me liking is good. I, Shou-Shuang; Lasting Frost Have graced you with my presence. FEEL HONOURED! (that's my signature) |
| Nightshadow Dweller 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sad, and yet it was an swaome story. Great job |
| xmarachanx 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseah, lovely! that was so well written! made me sad...T_T I lvoed it. ^^ |
| Sairalinde Inwe 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseYou did make me cry! Great job at writing this one, if it can get someone to cry, then you have done a great job at getting to the emotions of the reader. Nice work, keep writing! |
| Chain-Lightning 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseYou're a bastard you made me cry. T.T |