oh my god! so cuteeee!

Absolutely amazing. ._.

It was poetic, tearful, warm and lovely. I love the comparison of the physical impression that earrings leave on his palm, with the emotional impression Winry leaves on everyone. I couldn't help but "awww" at the end of reading this. -applause- You certainly deserve one.

Not a single spoken word and you were still able to portray his every thought and feeling (...which don't NEED to be spoken to be understood but...well you get what I mean!)

I think this fits perfectly into the manga. Perfectly. 3

Lovely job.. )

Ari chan

Lovely, this is very well-done. I like how, despite the all-around serious tone, you manage to incorporate some humor, what with going as crazy as Kimblee("and that's saying something") and when Ed chortles at his sudden poeic inspiration.

Great job :)

Wow. This was just great! A wonderful insight into Ed during chapter 73. You used some really amazing imagery and illustrations, particularly the thought of Winry spring from his head like Athena did to Zeus. Great job!

Brilliant!

well-written. haha! more edxwin! woot2x! haha!

And those types of impressions are the most important.

Absolutely brilliant! And so poetic! I love it when someone refers to the manga instead of the anime sometimes. It's a great comparison.

I3VUT3C

awe that was sweet, I love that part when Winry gave Ed her earings and I can't wait till that scene when he has to give them back. Very well done.

D'aw...that was so...

Ed was really IC, for he is a very serious and understanding character. And you managed to make him realize his love without saying it or acting on it too, which works for 'them'.

(And I like how you made the whole story about impressions and winry...and the last sentence was perfect.)

that was awesome! i haven't quite got this far in the Manga but i'm getting there. what volume is it?

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This was beautifully written! so touching! keep up your good work as a writer! _

This is the former ShadowCloud62! Hey! I really enjoyed this one-shot, and now that I think of it, it's true. Winry does leave a pretty good first impression. Your stories make me think, and that's a good thing! Hope to get more from you soon!

Elphaba