Aw, sweet and somehow sad, but swet! Thanks for this one, and also for An Ordinary Family, I really hope you'll continue the story, I got the feeling they are close to confessing their love ;-)
thanks for writing and sharing,
Lie

Oh, very sweet. I just about died at the end of that ep.

ok, I gotta get this out:

AW!

I crossed my eyes.

Silly dorky Bobby.:-D

It's only because your writing is so kickass that I can even be a good beta. If I was dealing with slop you know it wouldn't matter. ;)

Lovely, lovely, lovely, all the way around. It tapped into my wariness the way angst should, and even though for a second there I was all piss and vinegar you rushed in with some soothing dialogue and smoothed things over. As I often tell ya--this is what's happening behind the scenes. We all have our own ways of visualizing it, (the spats, the make-ups, etc.), but I esp. love your visceral takes.

Beta-hugs,

Alyssa

Aww. This was sweet. :) Very nice. I really like it. I'm glad Alex went to clear the air. I do tend to believe she didn't mean it the way so many people are taking it. It's driving me crazy. :) Anyway, great work. :)

I couldn't keep this damn silly grin off my face during that last part.

SO well-written. I really enjoyed it. We need more good writers like you (haha, no seriously. we really do. because right now, there are NO WRITERS AT ALL.) :)

It is so sweet it makes me want to hug someone.

great story! I was surprised when Bobby found in the tub passed out. great showing or emotion and the end of great where they were teasing each other about being married. that was funny! :)

YES! definitely an entertaining, believable take on what happened in smile. i like that they are headed shipward at the end. it sounds to me like they are well on their way to healing -- and maybe more.

Perfectly wonderful!

What's the oppisite of sticks and stones? Cause that's what you get! I love it! YOU MUST CONTINUE IT! Yes, I know your busy with the Ivy story, but this was amazing!

Hm, no stones, sticks, of flaming arrows. I like this! Excellent continuation of Smile. I could see the agnst happening between the two of them. Please keep going with this!

Hey its fan "fiction" so everyone needs to use their imagination for this one. I believe it could happen...it could happen to anyone, and I loved it!

Hey There

I'd love to see where this could lead? More soon?

Take care, GG

Ohh i loved this. Perfectly describes what could've happened after 'Smile'. As always, it was beautifully written. So no, no sticks, stones or flaming arrows from me.

Bravo :)