I loved it. I like when Bella isn't such a push over all the time.

I'm sorry but when I read the authors note I did have to correct you on this (Warning: Major Taylor Swift Fan, She Is My Idol) but she was 20 when she came out with the song.. I'm not sure when you wrote this, but she will be 21 on December 13, 2010. Hope this helps?

Keep Writing.

Lots of Love,

Dannie Elle

Love love love it :)

its so cute

Liked it.

You combined my two favourite things: Taylor Swift and Twilight. Thank you for such a brilliant story :) It's perfect.

I must say I was shocked. This is incredible.

aw...

that's sweet.

Enjoyed reading your story! good job!

Loved it!

Wow thats a wonderful one shot! Really well done.

"It’s like finding oxygen after being in submerged underwater for too long."

Wow! That was so good! This scene should have been in the book! You deserve a prize, but I don't have one, so here is a big smile instead :D

I'm going to go and read the rest of your stories now!

loved It!

So lovely!

So perfect!

Too bad Meyer didn't include a scene like this one in the book, a conversation between them after that little discusion; it would have deffinitely made my day!

I know this one did!

this is so good!

so realistic too , considering you said it was difficult to write , you made it look so easy haha!

thanks so much :)

I loved it! I always wanted to know what happened that night, but I never really got around to writing about it, so thanks! You did a superb job of giving them meaningful conversations, as well as keeping them in character.

I loved the 'how does it work?' part. Very insightful.