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| arielmoondance 2007-11-05 ch 1,  | abuseMy darling this was fantastic! I love your comparisons like the infection/antibiotics, I love alpha Lee beating up Stinger, I love Saul flying a viper, I love love love the smut- It was very powerful and moving! Thank you for sharing! |
| blameamy 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abusedamn you go saul. he may not like kara but he did alot of sticking up for her. she's got lee sticking up for her too damn what does she have,a spell on them ...LOL she like super woman and her and lee they are priceless although i think kara takes lee for granted because he's always there for her...but i absolutely loved the end and it was right of you to make the rating M because it definitely wasnt T (laughs) hoping to see more stories because your a fantastic writer...cant wait -BLAMEAMY |
| Serrafina 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseFirst, finding my way to this chapter was ridiculously complicated--and I have no idea why. But anyway, it was a good ride, albeit short. "A pair of flat eyes, fixated on something only she could see and an expressionless face stilled his hips." Absolutely chilling. My one complaint was something Lee said as he was beating the crap out of Stinger--he said that was punishment, and that abuse would be worse, and I was like, "Lee, I'm pretty sure beating the crap out of the man qualifies as abuse, no matter what he did." But then I thought about it some more, and it seemed more of a sign of how the Pegasus Syndrome was slowly getting to Lee. I don't know if that's what you intended, but it was quite disturbing to me. |
| torontokid2003 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseFrakking awesome! Lee beat the stuffing out of Stinger was the best BSGfic I've read in a long while. |
| Jaby 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseI really like your agressive and fiercy caring Lee. That man knows whats good for him and has no problem to go for it. A Saul Tigh who isn't looking for resolutions in the depths of a bottle of ambrosia but acting like the XO he's supposed to be. Looks like you're going to write a story full of strong characters, acting the way everybody wanted them to but beeing allways disappointed of in the show. |
| Athgarven 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseThis was very well written! (A couple of typo's still in there though;)) It didn't give me quite the same strong mental image as part one, but this: “Who told you?” Defensiveness underscored her question as she tried to put some space between their bodies. Levelling a look that told her he was speaking the truth – and keeping her where she was – Lee’s answer was honest, “Your Viper.” perfectly tied the two parts together! |