This story is really intriguing and hot. It's been a year since your last update, but hopefully this hasn't been abandoned entirely. Your writing style is really evocative; it would be lovely to see this story to its conclusion.

good chapter so far! its piquing my interest, and im reviewing on the 1st chapter cuz i have to say, OMG mental image of Light GRINDING at a HIGHSCHOOL DANCE -jaw drops- lol, so ya, ONWARD WITH READING! and since most likely i will like it, plz update soon. (wow...dont I sound snobby, hehe sorry 'bout that)

I love this story. It sets the standard that I expect others to meet. The writing is exceptional, very fluent and descriptive. It's disappointing, however, that this story hasn't been updated in such a long time. Please don't leave this story to rot, because it is superb. The day you update this story will be met with my feelings of upmost gratitude and joy.

Oh i love this story. i'm not a big Death Note fanfic person butt his one is truly great. very well written and good storyline.

when you updated last i was like YAY, the story is not dead and that feeling is slowely transforming into >.

Yeah, it indeed is progressing nicely. I can't tell you how much i loved the resolution of the previous chapter (''I'm gonna be sick!'') lol

I have a suggestion for a theme song, and it's funny cos the most famous Princess Tutu AMV (you said this fic was inspired by Princess Tutu, right?) was done on that song, you can find it easily on Youtube. The song is Hall Om Mig by Nanne Gronvall. It means Hold me in Swedish. One of he people who posted it on Youtube also posted a link to lyrics and translation. I think the song (by both thythm and lyrics) goes insanely well with this fic, if you don't mind it being in Swedish. If you can't find them, I can send you lyrics and translation myself. The Amv itself should be easy to find. Heh, if you're a Princess Tutu fan, you might even know of it.

So awesome! Please update soon!

This is awesome. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon

Oh, this rocks.

The thing that struck me most in this chapter was the understated relasionship between Naomi and L. It's very sad, and sweet -- and feels quite appropriate for a story about dancing.

I also loved that one line about the curve of L's back appearing elegant. Yes.

Yayz! Relationship development! YEAH! XD Update soon! Please! XD

Yay! another chap ^^ and I can't wait next one. This chapter was wonderful and this all morning talk between them so akward, so cute ^^ This is one of my favorite fics! ^^

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this is fantastic! I fell in love with this story months ago, but I thought I'd lost it forever by now.

The way this COMPLETELY AU story so clearly portrays their character, and the way you're working us into the romance (oh yes, particularly here) have made this one of my all time favorite stories.

"I'm gonna be sick!" Hah, what a way to bring us (or more correctly, crash us) back to earth.

Looking forward to Light's reaction in the next chapter XD

are we gonna see Misa any time soon? Can't wait to see hER face when she finds out *evil grin*, but probably we have some time until that.

Pure. Incredible.
... Drunken Light hanging all over L was amazing XD Of course the disadvantage of making out with a drunk is that they probably WILL puke on you XD
Their dancing was fantastic, well, my mental image of it was XD I love how descriptive you are and how you set the tone wonderfully, and... i'm totaly on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chap. I hope you find inspiration for it.@

No smut?

:(

... I want the smut! Whah! *Runs away crying...*