 pratly2 5/31/09 . chapter 5i no this hasnt been touched in a while i guess but i would really like you to continue this story. its really good. please, i beggith you.! |
 Alyssais my real name no lie 1/29/09 . chapter 5 im sorry but i loved what you said about the movie cuz its true and i think eric had more lines than all of the cullens put together and im hoping with the next movie cuz of the new director it will be better but so far i really love the story you wrote |
 NothingButTrouble 12/4/08 . chapter 5I know, right? The movie SUCKED. Okay, so there were a few funny parts, and I was yellin' at the screen just like the rest of the theater, but it sucked. Jasper had TWO lines. Two. And they were "Alice, what do you see?" and "ALICE!"
They downplayed the major points and upplayed the minors. I threw one of my Nerds at the screen during the fight scene.
The only reason my friend went was 'cos of the fight scene, and she wanted her ten bucks fifty cents back.
The highlight of my and my frineds' night was the mishaps we got into WAITING for the movie. Running through the parking lot, jumping in front of moving cars, walking into the men's restroom by ACCIDENT...it was far better then the movie.
And so was the candy.
But this story is REALLY, REALLY good and funny and random so PLEASE continue it!
Please? |
 Twilight.Taco 11/23/08 . chapter 5Aw...I'm sorry you didn't really like the Twilight
movie. In fact, *frown* I loved it.
Anyways, keep writing, man! Yaya! |
 AnastasiaXvampireXpixie 11/21/08 . chapter 3GAH! They've kidnapped Edward! HA! lol, i want to kidnap edward... and jasper... and emmett... jacob... everyone... Nice job me and lizzy freaked out into laughter at that part.. :) |
 VeraVallejo 4/28/08 . chapter 4 this is pretty kool :) |
 Two Tailz 4/4/08 . chapter 4UPDATE DAMMIT |
 edwardcullen101 3/23/08 . chapter 4That was very good and i like kimberly the best. But alyssa is cool too...
So random :)
I like random...
Cows with Guns
Keep writing :) |
 dancinqween09 12/25/07 . chapter 5AH! u crazy people! How can u do this to us? sorry i know its hard to rite a joint story. I tried once. lol dont ask. hope u guys figure it out coz its awesum so far.
luv yas |
 yayme2012 12/24/07 . chapter 5Man! That sucks. |
 Rin32493 12/24/07 . chapter 5Who called you a foolish, selfish bitch? I don't know you but I can say one thing some to write the way you do you are far from that. |
 yayme2012 12/19/07 . chapter 4Nice chappie.
WTF is Sanosuke? |
 silver drip 12/19/07 . chapter 4This is a funny yet out there fanfic. Update soon. |
 Rin32493 12/19/07 . chapter 4I love the chapter now I just have one question. is dwards time up because he met Bella |
 XxJanaxX 12/19/07 . chapter 4o i really liek this story! i love the oppistie thing going on! up date soon pleae! |