sure had me hanging to see who in the world married Squall...hope you continue the story

WOW MY DEAR IF ANYTHING THIS IS SERIOUSLY ONE DARK LOOKING PIECE. IT LOOKS SERIOUSLY INTERESTING. ID LOVE TO SEE HOW IT COMES ALONG. EXCELLENT NO DOUBT HEH. OH YEAH BTW IM WRITING UP THE ROUGH OF ME NEXT CHAPTER, SO IF YOU WNNA TAKE A LOOK JUST MAIL ME OR WELL MEET LATER. ADIOS

Interesting so far! I would predict Quisty and Squall will break up soon. It's quite difficult for 2 not-so-happy people be together. I doubt if Quistis can tolerate Squall's attitude. But more for my concern is Rinoa and Seifer. Are they really a couple here? Coz I haven't yet read any fic about this coupling.

Heeeeeee, interesting! Squally and and Quisty married but that ain't gonna last long! Keep it up! I wanna know more!

Whoa, this is pretty interesting! Keep it up. But I don't get how this is going to be a Squall/Rinoa and Quistis/Seifer fic if you already have Squall and Quistis married. Poor Quistis! Why can't anyone write a story where she's actually happy with Squall? Geez...

Agh!-Quistis? I figured his "wife" had to be her since you never mentioned the name 'til the end. Well I'm glad he's treating her that way, I hate those 2 together anyway. This is very interesting so far. I liked the intro. Nice way to hit it off.

yeah good story