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| Grey Wolf4 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great Alice 19th fic the one with a summary that caught my interest in a passing look over the section since I finished reading the Alice 19th manga. I may have to look more closely in the future... But hey enough of that this is a great premise for a fic though I have a few mixed feelings about the title I don't have anything else to propose depends on how the fic develops and I'm not the sort of guy who pretends to know everything. The First chapter is very interesting and seems to promise an interesting Alice 19th in the future. |
| samuraiyukari 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abusecute start ,way the go.. keep it up |
| Eternal Cosmic Sailor Satur... 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuseCute, I want to read more! |
| daianapotter 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuse“This is the definite end of our relationship.” this was great really xD |
| Mei Li 2007-12-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved the story. It was so sweet. But isn't Alice kind of young to be having a baby? Frey and Mayura together? :O That is definitely an interesting match. But who knows it may work. |
| angel2adevil78 2007-12-11 ch 1, | abuseits really good you should right more to it id read it |
| DemonSong10 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseThis looks promising. I always thought Mayura and Frey worked together. I mean, they both had such sucky endings. Frey had to go back and rebuild, and Mayura was all alone... So, really, great first chapter. You'll be hearing from me! Good luck! ~Song |