Amazing! It really gives off a feel as if this is a personal experience of yours-to which I hope certainly not and you simply have a very enhanced perspective and empathy. A very well written one shot that really portrays the deep love and connection Draco and Hermione share. Bravo!

It was soo sad but i really liked it!

So adorable ...

You should replace "tears of pain and sadness" with "anguish and melancholy".

I adored, the extended anchor metaphor! Its brilliance makes me want to plagiarise.

teach me the "private language" please *wink*

it looks like tolkien's quenya

Short and sweet also very well written!