I love it. ^_^

Wow, nice work! Love the scene between Ryan and Horatio and I could almost feel the heat between Horatio and Stetler - good writing! :-)

Your knowledge of traumatic brain injury is quite impressive. My son is a TBI patient and I always like seeing that others are familiar with the 'new normal' we learn to live.

What an awesome chapter! I love the layers that this story is providing, a deeper look into how Horatio came to be. The added bonus of course is the link to Ryan and explaining that cryptic remark about it 'being in his blood'. I always wondered about that...

Excellent work and look forward to an update!

Aww... the loaner smile :) That was a lovely little story. Chapter two was especially well done. I really like how you told us so much with the use of a simple news article.
Don't know why I didn't do this before, but I'm putting you on my author alerts so something like this doesn't slip by me again.

great chapter! loved it!

Good chapter, I like the way you have tied so many loose ends together.

Mom

Looks like another fascinating story--is this the beginning--or is this a short ficlet? Beautifully written as always--glad you're back.

Very excellent! I love the format of this chapter, how it tells the backstory as if we are readers of the actual paper. It was very informative, and incidentally , explains all of who Horatio is and where he came from. Lovely writing all the way 'round!

I can see that I'm going to enjoy reading this! Can't wait for an update!


Excellent work!

I'm throughly intrigued by the story! Interesting that Horatio was blind at one point. I love how at ease he is with telling his team about it, especially to Eric, there's more of a kinship I believe, now that Eric knows that he's not alone.

I'm also very interested about the 'anniversary' and what will be in the paper about Horatio. Very intrigued!

Excellent writing!

great chapter, update soon!

Interesting, interesting, interesting. The things you come up with, sweetie, can only be described as thus.

Keep up the good work and don't forget your other stories.

Mom

Cool! Can't wait to read more.

The Swordsman

love love love love! can't wait for more!!

You've made me very curious! Great story!