love it

A wonderful fic. I truly enjoyed it

Aw.
That was seriously adorable.
Keep writing Hyde and Jackie stuff!!
:3

more!

Completely amazing!

I LOVED THIS!! I REALLY LIKE HOW YOU DO THE WHOLE MISSING SCENES THING!! GREAT JOB!!

is this seriously your ending? cuz this is pretty bad

Wow! Awesome story! Very nice job =D

I like it! I love how it's really an expanded version of just one little snippet of the whole show. This is one of the more episode-like fics, and that's a big compliment. Keep going!

Aww
you can't leave us hanging like that.
PLEASE can we have some more,at least let us kno if she said yes or no.

VERY NICE! :D

awwee! I adore the way you right Zenmasters! They are just so perfect! This episode was really one of my all time favourite Zen episodes because it really showed how much J and H relied on each other. i would've killed for there to be more Zen scens though. Like say, THESE scenes. It was love. And i'm so glad you didn't have Hyde up and say I love you out of nowhere. IT would've been too cheesy and unrealistic, plus it would seem as though he'd just said it so they could do it. heh. But the scene was HAWT.

that was so cheesetastic...heh...all those heart to heart monologues always put me in a sappy mood...but that's a good thing...heh...anyway...not a bad two chapters...a few spelling/grammar errors here and there...some POV shifts in the narrative...but all in all...not bad...looking forward to that 8th chapter when ya finish it
^_^
MONICA

aw. :D

DANG this story is off the hook!!
LOL it's so very... uhm PERFECT! I LOVE it!!
so keep up the good work by updating updating and updating!!
please and thankyou.