Wonderful. I like this pairing a lot and you always do such wonderful work involving them. A few words out of place here and there~ but I still enjoyed it!
So Jade teases himself? Got it.

OwO That was so cute! I was squealing in my chair the whole time! And I loved the ending. Fanfiction needs more Jade x Guy.

Looks like I'm not the only one with flamer problems.

Personally, I think that the fic's pretty darned good. I have to agree about the errors, but that can easily be fixed. I normally don't comment on Yaoi fics, btw. I thought it was pretty funny, the line where Guy realizes "Never tease Jade Curtiss, that's his job".

die

You may want to proofread this; there were at least three rather in-your-face errors (to me, anyhow).

More love for GuyJade, though. ^_^
~Rayestar