*nosebleed* o.m.g. that... was so f*ing sexy! so well detailed and written! i couldn't stop reading for even the phone ringing! i love it! best pwp ever!

so hot ;D! yummy X3

Great job on this story, I read it a while ago, but never reviewed.

I like the spacing and everything, it makes it so much easier to read. ^_^

Keep up the good work!

~Azena Kira

Wow. ^_^;
I swear, there was real shuddering, blushing and embarrassment over here...seriously.
Just what I needed to break a bad mood. =]
You're a fantastic writer.

Delicious.

Beautifully written, gorgeously realistic and very hot.

=3

Ahahaa...
xD
This...is great!

Well...so much for simple showering over the lunch break. XD That was quite steamy and intense. Thanks for writing it and sharing it...

that was awsome! so well written, its a shame its not a story because i would definately read it, the best squall and seifer ive read ^_^

>:3 you are such an awesome writer. i wonder who was watching?

Oh my god. After that I only have two words left: HOT and DELICIOUS. Honest, Seifer was not the only one that felt as "Pleasant heat pooled in his loins"... dammit. I ain't getting close to no Irvine/Squall **, but damn I wanna read some more of your work-ah.

it's very hot...
yay... seifer/squall rulz !1
they're the best couple

Well written, and delicious! Pure sin. This is Seifer/Squall at it's most decadent.

xD Steamy sex scene~

This was amazing I loved it and I really liked the little tidbit about the camera! I wonder who could have been watching the, I'd say, long encounter? Wonderful work.

You rushed, and it's still amazing.