Hi, cute story but as bobcats said previously, it needs desperately to be shaped up. Do go over it, correct the spelling and grammar, and resubmit it. It really is a must to do that with all your stories.

I thought it was very cute and I enjoyed reading it, You did a really good job.

The story is sweet, lighthearted and shows promise but, honestly, I couldn't get through it because of all the grammar and spelling errors. They're not just a nuisance, they're actually misleading. Here's a random one I copied:

''No Seth thank you I was just thinking of Seth that's all'' Jessica assured him ,but he pulled over anyway.

A lot of people won't read or review a story where the author hasn't bothered to run a spellchecker or cared enough to make sure the story makes sense. It's a cute enough fanfic but it needs cleaned up badly. Find a friend to beta it, if nothing else. Good luck!

SethJess, ah how cute! I love the story and the matchmaking bit is fab!