WOW! So much emotion packed into so few words. This is beautiful.

Oh wow - this hurt. Beautiful work, but wow - this really made me sad to read.

Awesome fic.

Aww makes me wanna cry.

Very well written. Wow.

That was so beautifully written and so emotionally well done

Hey I will be the first to comment. I really liked it. I think that you did a great job even if this was our off day you couldnt really tell. I knew it wasnt because you write like a real writer, with poetry, and a sense of sometimes humor sometimes sadness, and then you can always put it all together for it to come out wonderful! I really like the line: "John's eyes, Mary’s eyes, their eyes locking together. A death, a deal and year pushing them to his place where that final goodbye had to come." And the line: "The wind rises, hovering the time above them but he refuses to release that warm mouth." I think that this was a great story to come up with. It'll be interesting what the T.V. show desides to do with Dean's death. Lol you never kno they might use your idea! Love ya!