Oh, so sad! Once again, a beautiful fic. I love your writing style.

Sweet fanfic!

I don't know what else to say, so I won't say anything at all.

Aw, I really like this.

Alien Roxi

Very nicely done! Loved the song (great band aren't they) and the fiction went perfect with it.

This is so beautiful! When I first saw the summary, I thought it might be a slash story, but since it didn't say that, I decided to give it a shot. I'm glad I did! Your use of similes and metaphors really brings the story to life. The comparison of Anakin's destiny to a star is a really unique idea, and this is so well written that you were able to pull it off. Kudos to you! You are going into my favorites!

an interesting take for Obi-Wans point of view.

It was beautiful. And so true. Very well done!

Very good. The extended metaphor works extremely well and there are some very poignant lines: "You should have known that destiny cannot be found; by its very nature, it exists only if it comes to you." and "Maybe it couldn’t breathe beneath that mask. I don’t know how you do it." are particularly nice. The story starts out as cute, but it's definatly not at the end...it's just sad, and touching.

So lyrical and filled with longing to see his loved one's star again, nice. I liked that Obi-Wan thinks of himself as the loser of that battle, because he did admit to loving Anakin and to do what he did to him would haunt, no matter the self-defense angle.

I love your story. I have always thought that Obi-Wan missed Anakin a lot when he was on Tatooine, even if Luke look alike his father in many ways. Keep whriting!