Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Just for Now
shadowsteph
2007-11-10 . chapter 1
o0o cute :D

I only saw one mistake since I'm not usually aware of things anyway XD
"because the looking Doumeki continued to give him"
Should have been just 'look'
Animelover621
2007-11-10 . chapter 1
aww~~
so cute!!
black_feenix
2007-11-06 . chapter 1
aw. so cute! that kiss left me all warm and giggly. It was nicely written! I didn't spot any mistakes.
Ah, you just gotta love Yuuko's interfering ways.
Return to Top