yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.

I liked the description of the challenges in getting back to normal and facing all the changes that have come their way.

-Ellie

I like the changes made to ch 59, they rounded out the chapter a bit better. I also like how sweet this chapter is. You describe Lois and Clark so perfectly.

Aww, very cute! Loved the scene at the end of the chapter. Clark is such a sweetheart. And Jason is absolutely adorable. I'm glad that Clark and Jimmy got their issues worked out, too. The tension between them was just difficult to read about.

Great chapter, though. Still miss Perry. Can't wait to see the new baby. ^^

Beautiful -- and yes, 59 was improved. Tying up all the loose ends is . . . entertaining.

Are we going to get to see the birth of the newest Kent?

Wow! Wonderful! You really know how to make a story shine. It took me several days to read up to this point. It's a miracle that it only took me that long... Though it's not too surprising--I couldn't put it down! Thank you so much for this new story! I'm looking forward to my next instalment.

Wow, i didn't know that about hugh luarie. He really would have been great as perry white.

Hugh Laurie would be an amazing Perry White! That would be wonderful! I burst out laughing at the mention of House. Anyway, I'm not gonna lie, I agree, this chapter would be even better if there wasn't so much summary.

yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.

Great chapter, I can't wait for more!

Terrorist ninjas, indeed.LOL

I liked the talk with Jimmy. I think it went really well, anger included. I think it was important for him to know that Clark didn't leave him out, he just stands alone.

I really liked the bit about what Jason has to contend with now and the nod to the Superman flying debate. That made me giggly despite the seriousness of the situation.

You may not be happy with it but I enjoyed this chapter a lot, if that helps.

-Ellie

ok, you jumped from Henderson telling them what he knew- to not giving any explanations which he asked for. You did wonderful with the Jimmy scene , but I think you could have expanded a bit more on Rick Kent- for a OC you did a good job.

loved this chapter. It was nice to have a bit of a recap worked in, and you did it seamlessly.

yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.

so cute. I love it. The part when Jason and Clark are flying together is so cute.