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| poshpuppy27 2008-06-28 ch 12,  | abusecrap! *sniff* your story touched my heart! *so*...tissues please! *sneezes*...LOVE it! ja~ |
| everyday-snowangel 2008-06-22 ch 12, | abuseaw! that was so cute! i enjoyed it alot! it was very good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ^^ EveryDay-SnowAngel |
| Asterxia Sy 2008-06-16 ch 12, | abuseBeautiful! I love how the whole story is set in Cloud's thoughts. And the little inferences of Aerith and Zack make it all the better! Great fic! Cloti forever! ^_^ |
| TheMagicalTapeworm 2008-06-07 ch 2, | abuseIts so sad... but i LOVE IT!! eep! its awesome. you should put a warning in the beginning of this chapter saying WARNING: MAY CONTAIN AWESOMENESS!! |
| Brocky 2008-06-06 ch 12, | abuseWonderfully put together, its hard to get so much perspective from one character, but you achieved it! very well done. If this is the last chapter, shouldn't the status say so? |
| cdaqtcherry 2008-05-13 ch 12, | abuseLove it! PLEASE UpDaTe! :) |
| Forever Yours. Always. 2008-05-06 ch 12, | abuseOMG! LOVED IT! SO CUTE, THAT I THOUGHT I WAS GOING TO CRY. LOVED IT! |
| Kitsune Kit 2008-04-27 ch 12, | abuseDaw That was ADORABLE! |
| Kohryu 2008-04-26 ch 12, | abusesugoi ne. very nice chapter ne. cant wait to read what else you have ne. |
| Mrs.CloudStrife 2008-04-25 ch 12, anon. | abusecool...short but sweet ending! |
| tifa07 2008-04-25 ch 12, | abuseooh, very cute and sweet story, I really love it. One of the sweetest CloTi fanfic I've ever read. Good Job :D |
| BabyGurl278 2008-04-25 ch 12, | abuse-Gasp- It's over!! Wow, I didn't expect that but I enjoyed the way you ended it. It was really sweet and I'm a sucker when the story title is mentioned somewhere in the story. You are a wonderful writer and I'm glad to have read this to the end. Everything was pulled together nicely, but I must say I'm surprised you managed to pull this into 12 chapters. This story seems like it is short, but maybe it is only because the chapters are shorter than what I'm use to reading. Don't get me wrong though, the content within each chapter was certainly not meaningless. This story has inspired me to start writing some Cloud and Tifa fics. I can't wait to see what other stories you write. Keep up the good work! Baby-G |
| BabyGurl278 2008-04-25 ch 11, | abuseAw, another good chatper. My apologizes for not having much to say this time around, but I'm estatic to read the next chapter based on the title. =] Keep up the good work! Baby-G |
| BabyGurl278 2008-04-25 ch 10, | abuseWow. This chapter was amazing. It's about time he confessed! lol. When he started talking to her after she fell asleep I had a feeling she was going to be awake. He can't confess his enitre love for her after all the years and she doesn't hear it. You made it complete. I also enjoyed the way you added the italics with his confession and then elaborate more around it. Hopefully I made some sense. =] Keep up the good work! *Baby-G* |
| BabyGurl278 2008-04-25 ch 9, | abuseMy apologizes for my late reviews. I found that I'm really far behind, but only because of being on vacation and the busy wonders of college. Another great chapter! I love how your chapters aren't long, but also aren't really short. They contain just enough imformation to make it complete and enjoyable. Cloud blushing?? Now that's something to see. It's hard enough to see him smile. lol. Another great chapter, I must continue on. Keep up the good work! Baby-G |