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| emz 2007-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was told beautifully, even if it is about a bit of wood made by the loving hands of Will Scarlett (squee!). It would've been better not to have been told from the point of view of the tag, though. It should've been 'it' instead of 'I' because of it being an inanimate object. That is constructive critism and not spam, because I loved it. It was fantastic. |
| Lynda 2007-11-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! You "became" the tag. Outstanding! Speaking as an English teacher, you have an incredible talent for 1st person point of view, particulary with an inanimate object! Well done! I felt the hurt and betrayal of 'the tag'. |
| Radar-rox 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseoh wow that was brilliant! i dont know what else to say except well done! |
| vultures 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseA really interesting fanfiction, and a wonderful insight into Allan's character. I love your unusual choice of perspective. Very unique =] |