I still adore this story, and I absolutely adore Leon/Riku too. I'm so glad you updated! It's still so good, and I love all of their interactions. You always did write those well. This chapter was very well written - I loved the action. It was also adorable, how Leon continues to deny his feelings. Ah...I can't wait for the next chapter! Fantastic!

yay! Another fantastic chapter~ x3
That's right Leon, admit to yourself your feelings for Riku! ha ha. Can't wait to read more LeonxRiku goodness~
You have a really interesting plot going on here and the characters are all quite believable. Great job to both you authors!

woo! yay for a new chapter ^_^ that was awesome. but i wonder what's happening with riku... hm... it's good that cinderella harbors no ill feelings towards riku; then again, i really doubt that she would have. lol now they're off to find ultimecia! can't wait till you post the next chapter

Ha ha, great and funny idea for incorperating Snow White's world and making the prince a kind of idiot. Truly answers the question of how he knew where Snow White would be. xD Yay for Riku and Leon intervention~!
Speaking of the couple, ahem, I think both of you authors are weaving a very adorable plot to get them together. Just the little moments of them looking at the other or Leon standing close to Riku...ah, makes my inner fangirl swoon.
And the story itself is quite entertaining! I've never played FFVI so learning these new tidbits about Squall's world and the people he knews is really enlightening.
I can't wait to read more for this charming story. ^-^

This story is awesome! Absoluetly love the way you and Riku-Rocks have sorted everything out, and Riku and Leon's interactions are fun to read. Can't wait to read more!

I love how this story is going :)

Keep posting new chapters as soon as you can!

Adorable!


Sorry I can't say more but I'm in a huge rush~

Fantastic though, please keep it up and give this fic more attention~

*bliss*

I have to say it's nice reading one of your fics again.

I'm actually a little giddy that Ultimecia's making a cameo. I think she's pretty cool and evil. An alliance of sorceresses is something dangerous, especially if one of them can manipulate time!

They are so cute!!

Okay four words, "Leon is SO blind" lol. But it was cute.

Thank you for updating this story. I really REALLY like this one so update it again, okay?

Byz!

you were right! the ending was really good. i found it hilarious that the man had this knightly look about him yet he couldn't fend off a couple of measly heartless. i enjoyed irvine making riku blush and leon having not a clue as to why ;) can't wait till you post up the next chapter

zOMG LOL! Leon is so dense sometimes... it's amazing... xD... MAKE LEON GET IT... please!

Tee hee. I liked this chatper.

I know it's been forever since you submitted this, but I finally got around to finishing it so here's the reveiw.

I like it. I like the concept of the possible return of Ultimecia, for reasons that could be very different from yours. Those reasons include a pairing that would not fit in your universe.

Poor Leon, you got to feel bad for the guy. He does hide him emotinos very well. The return of Irvine will be fun.

My theory on Ultimecia is the Wicked theory as it's called. Basically, I beleive she was picked on and riduculed as a kid because she's a sorceress a everyone seems to hate them. It may have finally came to her that if she gets treated like a witch, she might as well be a witch. That's the basic summary. I found it on a Final Fantasy wiki site and I thought it was very interesting.

XD I LOVE THIS!... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP, LOVE YOU JEDIEMPRESS!