so... a had read "mana" a long time ago and i never really stopped imagining that it was really allen's past, it was like canon in my mind ^^". But now that i read this one i felt truly depressed... Maddie's son died! and allen never met him! now i'm wishing i had forgotten about your fic, because i wouldn't be so sad about it now... but you can take that as a compliment, since it shows just how much i love your characters... anyway, excuse me, i'm gonna cry now ;_; poor allen...

Reading this after reading 'Mana' just about made me break down crying - so bittersweet that Allen would find out he had a brother only to lose him again. But it was lovely to revisit the characters from the previous fic, even if only briefly. It's so sad, the way he had to let go of everything to become the way he is now.

GOD. That was so sweet. My eyes are brimming with tears. You're a stroong writer!

I'm crying.

Why did you kill everyone? I mean i almost cried when i read 'Mana" and now i am almost in tears reading this. It's so sad. Did everyone die, or just Emmy?

By the way, I love your storys and companion pieces.

aww,.,. this was very emotional,.,. great and really sweet! :D
AlLenalee fanatic! ;)
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i was worried Rivka wouldnt remember him,.,. but i was glad to know she was just pretending! :)
but it was sad that Allen had a brother but he died in such a young age,.,. :(
really nice! keep it up! ;D

Oh my god. *cries* I love it.

T_T Go Allen. You rock...

Not much else to say other than a wonderful reminance...

AW~ Thats so depressing to hear! Allen learned he had a baby brother then learned he died within 4 minutes. I liked to have known what had happened with the rest of the gang. Keep moving forward.. I noticed you wrote that a lot in "Mana" too, it's in the actually manga and anime though it doesn't come up as often. It's kool you knew it was something Allen got from Mana and used it. Great job! Loved it!! d-(^.-)z

Aw, that was bittersweet. But good none-the-less, it's nice to have caught up with Rivka and see her try so hard to protect Mana after all these years.

A very nice companion shot. ^_^

Amazing oneshot. I bet Allen would've been incredibly happy to see Rivka again. Sad to hear that Edward was dead though. Must be ** Allen. =[

Sad, and yet sweet. A nice way to tie up loose ends with your story Mana. I liked it very much ^_^

Oh this made me cry! I liked it very much though. Its nice knowing what happened afterwards.

Simplely beautiful,I love your fanfics. The anguish is the chocolate syrup on the sundae of my afternoon.







They sowed wind, and wind, and ever more wind; for they alone knew how to reap the whirlwind and make a profit out of it.

Simply beautiful.

The anguish is the chocolate syrup on the sundae of my afternoon.





They sowed wind, and wind, and ever more wind; for they alone knew how to reap the whirlwind and make a profit out of it.