easier than writing names in a notebook butiful joke i ho[e eveone got that joke or else i might have to start writng in my notebook

I REMEMBER WHAT I WAS GOING TO TELL YOU BEFORE! I thought of it during the heart attacks, and I was like.. that sounds familiar. And the notebook confirmed it! It's from Death Note! (I love Death Note) Only you're using the THOTH, but you said "Easier than writing a name in a notebook" and I think you're wonderful for using that!

Light is completely awesome. And my friend said, why would you like Light, he's psycho? ... And I say "I know. I love him for that."

Anyway, back to Ben 10...

More detailed research? I don't trust him on that...

Ya know, I'm afraid to know if I can trust Alex at all. I WANT to... but...

Hey, cooking skills CAN impress a girl, especially one who can't cook (aka: me. I have yet to learn)

Aw! Ben's such a sweetheart.

This is one moment where I might not gag. It's not too cliche. I like that.

I didn't even SEE the name Dr. Animo, and I read the ending and I'm like, that is so him, and then I saw you already mentioned his name. :(

Love,

Ivy

how did you come up with this pharaoh dude?

That was quite interesting. My favorite part was when we get to learn more about Bucerusian physiology. Things look very bad for Ren now! What will happen next?

Dear Author

Superb chapter!

The segments with Gwen and Alex were tense, profound and romantic.

The segment with Pharaoh was very creative and melodramatic. The way he obverses the situation with ruthless calculations and arranges some other things in motion; like an evil chess player moving his pieces to defeat his opponent.

The part where Ren leaves to go accept the procedure was emotional. Funny since she can't express her emotion.

The segments where Alex takes Gwen to his house was very creative and emotional, the way Alex tells Gwen know a few things about himself and Gwen realizes how lonely he is.

The final segments were very dramatic. Ren indirectly walks into a trap. The scientists explain a few things to her (interesting facts about Ren's species). Then they sedate her and study her omnitrix (Uh oh). Then they do the procedure on her. I wonder what will happen. I hope she gets her wish, whatever happens.

Interesting that Dr. Anmo will appear too.

The wholesome standards are good too. Some mature references made me slightly uncomfortable; but you didn't cross the line. THANK YOU.

I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless.

Data Seeker.

P.S. Please alter certain details in your Code Lyoko fanfic. I'll continue praying for you.

WOW what an update!

this is a good chapter and I cant wait to read what happens next!

please update soon.

and great job!

Very nice. Please update soon!

thanks for updating

Ren must really love Ben to continue with this after knowing these persons know more about her species than herself.

Great chapter, as usual. Gwen as a test subject... not good for her at all. And Project Freak can also be called Project Let's Give Ben Some Troubles.

Keep the good writing.

Aloysius is about to have a field-day with that Omnitrix info.