I think Harle would have kissed Glenn first. And maybe the story could have spanned for a longer time frame. They could have developed feelings for each other over time, not on one first seemingly close conversation.

Very interesting story! It never occurred to me before that Harle and Glenn had so much in common. I liked how conflicted she was when it came to helping Serge regain his old form, too.

Kasamri thought that this was truly magnificent! If you would please do him the service of perhaps translating Harle's French, it would be most appreciated (^_^)