Reviews for Nothing really ends

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Lady Charity 2008-01-11 ch 2,	abusePlease update soon. Please?! I really like your story, you have written this really well. There are some mistakes, like you write 'loosing' instead of 'losing' and putting periods where there should be commas in one place somewhere...but otherwise, it's absolutely awesome! I really want to know what happens next, please update! You got me eager for the next chapter!
rubydoo 2007-12-04 ch 2, anon.	abusehey update soon okay this isn't too bad.
ihearttwojacks 2007-11-27 ch 2, anon.	abusei think you have a great story going here. i am not an author but i am pretty good at grammar and would be willing to proof read for you. Just email me with "fanfiction edit" in the subject box if you would like me o check for errors. so far it has been pretty good, and i am really interested in the story.
rubydoo 2007-11-19 ch 2, anon.	abusethat is so not fun to get paint in the eyes. i do hope that tom is okay. thank you
LibraryTech 2007-11-19 ch 2,	abuseOK, this going good...at least he's not dead...I hope he doesn't become blind..Doug was a bit funny with his thinking..I hope Tom has some happy moments too..up date soon.
LilaGrace 2007-11-19 ch 2, anon.	abuseThank you so much for updating! Yeah, it is short but it's cool that u updated. I wouldn't mind if the chapters were a bit longer though:) And don't worry, your english is quite good! Please update soon! Luv, Lila
goodnightmysweetprince 2007-11-18 ch 2, anon.	abuseman this story's depressing, even more so than that one where tom is paralysed, but i still cant wait for more
andaere 2007-11-18 ch 2,	abuseYay, I'm so glad you're updated! It's okay that it's short, because I was getting a bit depressed. No one was updating. But then you updated and now I feel much better. =) This is really good! Your English is great. Just a few typos, but everyone makes those. Poor Tom... He's in a heck of a lot of trouble, isn't he? Having spray paint spayed into your eyes, and face? I can't imagine how painful that would be. I can't even stand it when I get one eyelash in my eye. I love how you write Doug, and how he reacts, and everything, all the characters seem really... in character. Which is a really hard thing to do, so good job! I love this story! Please try to update soon, and I'll be your faithful reviewer! =D
Babydoll32 2007-11-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseGez, that's GREAT! Loving this start so much! What happens to Tommy? Please update as soon as possible:-)
Hanson Fan 2007-11-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat Story! Your English is terrific! Please update soon!
Sparrows Soul 2007-11-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is a very very good start. Intriging and, considering you're native language isn't englsih, extremely well written :D You're doing a great job. God, has Tom been blinded from the spray? I'm worried for Tom now :S But I really do like the angle you're taking with this story. A really great job :D Continue soon
procol harum 2007-11-09 ch 1,	abuseThis is great XD Your grammer and vocabularly and what not is pretty well on... Ahem, yes, the story, great idea so far, and zomg!? What did you do to Tom? Lol, gah, definitely can't wait for more XD
LilaGrace 2007-11-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseAww, what an interesting start! Don't worry about your english, it's marvellous! Please update soon, I'm surely gonna read it:) Luv, Lila
LibraryTech 2007-11-06 ch 1,	abuseOh my goodness..You did very good..I would think that English was your first language..I want to read more and see what happen to Tom. Thanks..up date soon!
rubydoo 2007-11-06 ch 1, anon.	abusehey thats pretty good keep it up.

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