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FrecklesWeasley
2007-11-17 . chapter 1
wow that was depressing.
no offense or anything.
i especially liked the part tho where it says:

"And she couldn't believe that there were people saying to her "you need to get over him." How could she do that? How could she do it when all she ever wanted to do was walk over to him and kiss him with every ounce of strength she held - imbue that kiss with every heartfelt emotion - her love, her guilt, her sorrow, her wishes."

i kinda feel like that right now, but its over someone who hardly knows who i am, but i still love him.

~Freckles
ImpNo1
2007-11-08 . chapter 1
Ron's such a jerk. Hermione needs someone better. Loved ur story, write a sequel!

~Toe

~MM
shadeofpoison
2007-11-06 . chapter 1
I really liked it. I think everyone feels this way sometimes. Including me.
flixie6
2007-11-05 . chapter 1
Hey! Soo sad! :( but written very well. Hey, when you do feel like writing a sapping story...make it a sequel to this! ?? please, just a suggestion. Make it happy in the very end! ^_^ You don't ave to, it's just a wish.
connieewing
2007-11-05 . chapter 1
aw this is so sad! I like it but sad.
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