"Fine". Wow that is pure genious. I really wished you had kept going but the ending was too good to change.

This is cute and sweet and perfect. EdWin Awesomeness.

Aw is right Al.

I love this especially the lines :"...the snow was falling in a torrent of cotton.

"...he fought the urge to scream with her."

Really well done. I have a FullMetal Alchemist story that I've been working on and I was currently working on a later chapter that involves child birth of Ed and Winry's daughter. I was going to name her after Ed and Win's moms too actually but decided agiasnt it. Now I read this and feel more justified in my decision. It gives me good insight to see how other people write there stories so I don't end up accidently copying ideas already posted.

I love this chapter. This whole collection is wonderful.

Haha!

In character and brilliant all these I read so far are great!

Out of all the EdWin snippet fics I've read, this definitely ranks up there as one of the best. Your attention to detail and characterisation is typically brilliant and enhances the stories as you can actually 'see' the same Edward and Winry from the anime/manga developing in this sort of way. Really enjoyed this, hope to be reading a new chapter soon!

lol the last one amused me ace write some more plz there wkd :D

I love Mustang! It's always funb to write those two together!

That was so sad, but great too! Keep up the great work! I really liked the last one too!

Aw, chapter 5 is so very sweet. I love that Ed's so protective of Winry. Though I do wonder if Al got rid of those fists of stone in the street...

Aw, how cute.

Cute story so far! Please update soon! :)

cute and sweet!

aw...so cute!

Oh my god, that was so funny and awsome! Good job!

pretty damn interesting