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Twillightfairy
2009-08-14 . chapter 12
I really liked reading this story and now I'm wanting to read the next part, I can't wait.
inertbiscuit
2009-08-02 . chapter 12
I really enjoyed your fic. Great action and you keep the situation moving. You also have an enjoyable reading of your writing, very nice. The interplay between Renegade and 007 are really fun.

I was wondering how you were going to wrap everything up in one more chapter, but even more excited you're doing a sequel. I'll check it out when it comes.
yodeleo
2009-07-28 . chapter 4
i like the story but i dont like the whole acid is jean-paul
ChasingCarsAllDayLong
2009-07-18 . chapter 11
Finally over!! ^_^ Can't wait!! Keep up the good work!
LilSukio
2009-06-23 . chapter 11
Omigoodness! I knew it but hoped it was not true! Poor 009. I hope the ending is happy.

Keep up the good work :)
YSRS
2009-06-21 . chapter 11
nice work in finishing this off
Kitcat
2009-03-16 . chapter 10
Poor Phantom, I feel so bad for him. I hope he can get a happy ending. Anyway, this is a great story and I hope you will update soon.
YSRS
2008-07-28 . chapter 9
wow! nice story
leavingyouforme
2008-07-13 . chapter 9
Yes, it has taken defintely some time, but that doesn't matter.^^ The chapter is great: The beginning sentimental and funny at the same time - I love how you described with one short flashback what Joe was to the team.
The middle part with Renegade's appareance surprised me, but it and the last part went along with the atmosphere and I couldn't help but feel like in the show. Her thoughts have this melancholic, hoping and at the same time defeated feeling you can't escape from Cyborg 009.
leavingyouforme
2008-04-27 . chapter 8
I really like this chapter, I was a little surprised Pyuuma went in the little wrestling fight with Jet but it just shows how each of the team loves each other as their family.^^ And the good-natured banter between Chang and G.B. was funny.

Death's part was the most intense moment, it's really a painful contrast between the former kind soul of Joe's dwelling in this body and cold, blood-lusting mind of death. *shudder*

What I have to criticise, though, is the fight between the team and the Hades guys: Why didn't Dr. Gilmore and 006 get caught into the fight? They were both next to 007 when Nocturna attacked him. And where were 008 and 005 all the time?
Written Parody
2008-04-27 . chapter 8
NEW CHAPTER -claps while running around in a circle-
Sorry coffee does something to me.
Once again another great chapter with awesome new twists!
A hugely gigantic thug of good luck for the next chapter!!
leavingyouforme
2008-04-07 . chapter 7
Wow, you got me anew confused: So, Phantom is the copy of 009? Okay, I understand this, but why wants Dr. Tudor "revive" 009's real body as "Death" and how's this possible?

"What?! Get back here you stupid-" 002 started cursing in several different languages, main ones being mandarian, german, and japanese.
- I really can imagine this scene, and I've got good ideas how he learnt actually German and Mandarin (Japanese isn't so special because everybody can speak this): German because Albert sometimes likes to curse loud too, and Mandarin from Chang when he's cooking. XD
Written Parody
2008-04-02 . chapter 7
YAY AN UPDATE!

Oh my gosh, it's another great chapter. I really loved it, keep up the good work, mkay? Can't wait till teh next chapter!!
Written Parody
2008-01-27 . chapter 6
Oh my word thanks so much for the update! I'm in love with this story: it has a great plot and it's very well written. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!
leavingyouforme
2008-01-23 . chapter 6
Oh man, to know what Hades did to Joe...

What a twist! I really didn't expect that Jet and Ivan would be freed. The cards were again huddled up, shuffled and dealt out - now everything's possible once more and we don't know what's going to happen next.
I liked the humour with G.B. acting like his normal self, as well as Chang did in his kitchen (never come close to him when he's cooking XD). Too bad we still don't know anything about Pyuuma, but I assume this will come soon, anyway.
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