aw i love it!

you should so write more or a sequal or something this was really good its like u were riting my life though cause pretty much everything u wrote has happened in my life well except for i found love but he wasnt a vampire and im really skinny insted of overwight but yeah it was really good even know it brought back memories it was really good and u should so wrte more

this is a great story. i love the fact that bella is over weight because so many girls and women can relate to these universal feelings. the story truly emphasis the awesomeness that is edward cullen...his huge heart and the ability to see the beauty within. simply excellent story...well done!

This is so great! You have excellent ideas! I really liked this fic because it focuses more on inner beauty. A lot of people seem to forget about that in Twilight ff because the vamps are so beautiful. Inner beauty is much more important than outer beauty.

love it! will you be continuing it? i hope so ide love to see a smut scene between these 2 :)

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beautiful story... really good.
hope u update soon...^_^

Beautiful story!

I really am enjoying this story. At parts it seems a bit absurd, to me at least. I have honestly never seen anyone picked on as ruthlessly as Bella has been and for as stupid a reason(S). Growing up I was always classified as one of the 'bigger' girls, actually the largest, yet was never mocked, if anything I did the mocking. As I matured I grew out of it and became 'normal' in the weight department. And I get teased more now than I ever did when I was extremely fat, and it is generally by people bigger than myself. I have personally never witnessed anyone that harsh so suddenly, it seems absurd to me. The story is marvelous nonetheless. I am enjoying it greatly and hope to read more.
George

This story is awesome, I read it all in two days and loved every bit! <3

~TheRandomHachi~

Okay I got to the last chapter and I was happy for the ending, but it ended too soon. I loved the story. I agree with what you said about the whole body image thing. thank you for not making bella a stick figure.

I absolutely love this story...I hope that this story has an ending. I'm trying not to skip ahead an see. but if you don't PLEASE finish it.

I loved this chapter.

aaw ur story is so good i loved it

all of bellas insecruties r what some ppl feel everyday and its nice that u wrote about it

aaww the ending was so sweett

keep up the great work :)

hey, just letting you know that I really like your story :)
Its cool how you have put an awesome twist on the original, and it makes it really interesting to read. And big ups for making Bella a real girl!
keep up the good work!