Aww... I totally loved this!! My writing isn't half as good!! It was so cute! Especially the ending, and it was really original!

really sweet. =]

aw

loved it update soon

ah, that was good, so cute and sweet!

Ahahahaha, That was TOO cute! Although I kinda think the 'nutritionalist' plot was a little shaky, I really liked Derek proposeing to her on the ice...Ive never seen that plot before. Very cute. Awesome job- And dont beat yourself down so much on your writing!

AW. lol. that was adorable. and such a casey last line. lol. really great job!! write more oneshots soon! Seriously, I dont think it was bad at all.

hahahaha...lollz...i luvd da last sentence...wow im lyk tearing from laffin so much...hahaha...omg...omg catch my breath...hahahaha...i luvd it...please rite more lyk these! =)D

I love this. Pure Dasey.

ha ha. This was good.

aw, thats cute lol I'm glad you added something we all know Derek loves...Casey, lol I mean hockey ;)
well like I said I liked the hockey part since Derek is a total hockey head, and the fact that you put 'Babe Raider' into the story was funny.
And me being the slowest person on the planet had no idea what the 'ex-boyfriend' thing was till the end lol
great story:D

OH! That was cute