Haha! I just loved it!

lol

hahahaha

I'm sure I've read this fic before, but it's hilarious xD

Ahh, the cutest thing. So sweet -what sibling love, what bromance. 3

Keep writing!

LOL! That was os cute! _

nice verey enretaining lawl x]

thats y i dun love! SEE WAT LOVE CAN DO 2 PEOPLE! THANK U FOR THE AWARENESS! (im mental)

Aishmish*

aw, cutee. lol(x

lol! i like this pairing. never see it, and its rare, but hey, its there and its working! i was just wondering since other people are confusing me, is ryoga ryoma's blood brother?

ah... so sweet.. brotherly love.. :p

i love it

This is Ayumi Nazu speaking:

lol, Ryoga got infected!lol! (lollaugh out loud)

Lol. I love it!D Cute and sweet-

!HaruCherry!

xD Aw... TezRyo would've been very cute. But Ryoma x Ryoga is very nice as well! xD (Actually, this is the first RyomaRyoga fic I've read.) xD

-x-

...boredly said Echizen Ryoga as he stared at the ceiling...

-x-

Maybe you should switch 'boredly' and 'said' around to 'said boredly'? '“It’s your fault for beings sick, so shut up, be a good boy, and eat the freakin’ pills,” Echizen Ryoga said boredly as he stared at the ceiling, throwing the medication at the freshman.'

I dunno... It sounds awkward, the way you have it. But it could just be me. xD

I like it though. The humor and fluff

-R

Aw...How sweet! I love it, so much brotherly love.

HAHAA! This is very good. ]