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| fire-emblem-girl 2008-10-07 ch 7, | abuseGood goin' Roxas. Falsely identifying a toaster as scrap metal *shakes head* ha ha. This was a good chapter, many revelations about them both! Can't wait for the next chapter whenever it may appear! :D |
| ochotama 2008-10-07 ch 7, | abuseUpdate! =D I've been waiting for this for ages, i am so glad i get to read another amazing chapter from Burning Bridges. I have recommended this to many of my friends, all Axel/Roxas fans should read this. I wonder if Roxas will get a tattoo? Keep up the amazing writing! Ochotama~ |
| sad kuroneko 2008-10-06 ch 7, | abusehmm... i wonder what that last part was about... but oh well. it was nice to have an update, and i cant wait for more |
| kitty-cakes 2008-10-06 ch 7, | abuseYay a new chapter! :D I'm loving this story. This was a great chapter as always! I'm interested in finding out Roxas' whole story. And Larxene the weapons crazed tattoo artist is just perfect, haha. |
| Angel of Lavender 2008-10-05 ch 7, | abuse'people like us' could be any number of things~ Of course, I immediately try to pervert it, but I think he was refering to run away's. Anyway! super lovely :D Always a pleasure to read |
| Aislinn Gesine 2008-10-05 ch 7, | abuseGood Lord. I feel bad for Jim now. Also, does Cat get a name? The general feel of this chapter was kind of... depressing. :[ I kind of wanted Axel and Roxas to get roaring drunk, then jump each other. Then Roxas would feel stupid and leave, and Axel would go after him and be all "Shit, Kid, I told you I'd take you all the way" and wouldn't take no for an answer. But that would be the easy route. So I'm excited to see what comes of this. :D |
| Ritsuka's.Personal.Stalker 2008-10-05 ch 7, | abuseah, once again, another beautiful chapter. Theres just something about your writing style thats so enticing ! I can't wait for the next chapter, Oh and if your looking for inspiration for Axel, or just the story in general, I suggest listing to 'Nancy boy' by Placebo I don't know, but it always helps me when I need inspiration, The song just sorta Screams 'Akuroku' to me Though that may only be for me...oh well, At least I'm trying to help xD |
| jiv3y 2008-10-05 ch 7, | abuseOoh, interesting stories. Haha Larxene the tatoo artist. I like that idea. |
| dragontwin99 2008-10-05 ch 7, | abuseThanks for updating :) |
| AngelWing1138 2008-10-05 ch 7, | abuseI wonder what's making Roxas need to run away...Kind of curious. I doubt it's just like, normal teenage angst since you never get far with the whole, 'My parents don't understand me' bit, and he's keeping it to himself instead of blabbing it like any attention-seeking runaway. *shrug* So. Interesting. Naminé seems to have some sort of clue too, as to what's going on.. Ohh, intrigue. XD And Jim is WEIRD. XD Weirdo kid. With his long hair and...Weirdness. *doesn't know another descriptive fitting enough* Mmyess... So, curious to see where you go with this. ^^ It's looking really good so far! I'm enjoying it. And we're all pretty patient over here and know that outside of the computer and the keyboard you do have a life out in the real world that needs attention. So if you can't update, we understand. At least, reviewers should understand. Author's aren't glued to their computer chairs after all. Happy writing! |
| May All Your Bacon Burn 2008-10-05 ch 7, | abuseYay, another update! Awesome as always. ^^ But poor Roxas/Namine. And heh, Axel was living with a weapons-obsessed tattoo artist. That's awesome. XP But I hope you find time and motivation to write more soon!! |
| 13loves8loves9loves6 2008-10-05 ch 7, | abusele gasp~ yay~! haaha update >w |
| Iron Serenity 2008-10-05 ch 7, | abuseIt totally made my day when ffnet sent me an email saying you updated your story! I must say, it was definitely worth the wait. |
| Nuppi 2008-10-05 ch 7, anon. | abuseHave I mentioned you use the vaguest chapter titles for this fic? I like it anyhow. In a sense, it leaves a bit of room for imagination. And questions. It's just different. I gotta say, I'm a bit disappointed with Axel's cold attitude towards the itty-bitty kitten. But that just might be the cat person in me. It's just that I find it hard to imagine Axel as uncaring to something helpless. Oh well. I like the Axel/Larxene violent, great sex relationship and nothing more. It's like they use each other. I remember it in Waiting.. Yes, just guess how many times I've read it. Then double it. 8D " - - one last ‘fuck you’ to my parents before I blew out of there.” " Loved that line. It just told so much about Axel and his parents. One last FU. You are so good at writing a character who's finding it difficult to talk about something: the pauses, the fidgeting, the I-want-to-get-away-from-here-NOW. Jim's starting to get interesting. Don't tell me he has a crush on Axel or some "he's my big brother, not yours" syndrome. Or is Axel the only person who Jim feels has ever cared for him, unconditionally? Hmm, may we see a confrontation of Roxas and Jim? A fist fight? Over Axel?! He'd love that. I'm just rambling. Just finished translating a longish text from Finnish into English. It's for a university class. I blame that. You're in a good track of breaking the 10-chapter limit. Now to finish with a thoughtful last bit: Burning Bridges has a sad undertone. Like everyone is alone in the end. |
| ScreamForSOH 2008-10-05 ch 7, | abuseI am really liking this fic. Hope you update again soon. xoxo |