Reviews for Speaking From The Heart

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silverangel83 2008-07-20 ch 15,	abuseAw, that was so cute!
useless_mushroom 2008-06-08 ch 1, anon.	abusewow, that was great. did u write the songs yourself? they are awesome!11
NiteAngel 2008-04-29 ch 14, anon.	abuseHey there! sorry i didn't review this earlier but i started reading the chp but had to go and never got back to it till now. just wondering...i think i may have missed this but besides blue did they paint other stuff in the room too? but otherwise the chp was pretty good... but below are some things you can fix. Needs editing here: “I’ll met you in the lounge.” [meet] “come on, Sue and Reed will be in back tonight'... [back in] ? Ben kept giving him questioning as they ate their lunch in silence. [questioning glances] ? “I never expected to hear form here again,'... [from her] “Why so blue Ben?” Johnny asked with a grin. [should be a comma just after blue] “I could ask you the same thing kid.” [comma after thing] “the paint is dry, no come on,'...['now' not 'no'] “oh no, it was excellent,” [capital O] beside her and Reed’s room, “this better be good.” [should eb a full stop instead of a comma after room. and capital T for 'this'] “congratulate her for me won’t me'... [won't you] “Your, you’re staying in New York?” ['You're'...you're staying in NY?] “I’ll always be her for you Saffron' [here] I don’t want to be a hindrance, it would be such am annoyance…” ['an' annoyance] it was quite clear that he saw her as more that a friend. [more 'than'] i'll hopefully read the next chp when i have more time...really busy these days. cheers! NiteAngel :Þ
rainbow cookies 2008-04-28 ch 15,	abuseFINAL CHAPTER! Wow, i loved it. Can't believe this story is over! Well done, great job :)
cassiexcrimson 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abusehey :] this is really cute!
Dark-Angels-Tears 2008-04-04 ch 14,	abuseIsn't it joyous? I logged in for you XD Personally I like how this story is turning out... though I am a little confused about how randomly the arc with Ryan just died.. and now there's something with this new chick Saffron. Oh well, it's make sense in the end I suppose. (ONG RYAN IS SAFF'S LONG LOST BRO) XD No not really. I like The Spirit Within and Speaking From the Heart... both are coolio. :D This story is really great, one of the most unique song-fic-let-things I've ever read. Be proudz. KyliedaRock for the winz. =3
fangrl 2008-04-03 ch 14,	abuseoh my gosh! i am so sad that its ending, but so happy we find out what happens! i did notice a few spelling and grammer stuff, you might want to go back through, but it was frekin amazing. UPDATE SOON!
NiteAngel 2008-03-17 ch 13,	abusewow...this is really interesting...and i haven't read something like this! johnny as a musician? who would've thought? good work! :Þ
marvelousmariaah 2008-03-16 ch 13,	abuseyayy update! i feel really bad for sue and ben, telling him hes not part of the famiy :( im glad johnny broke his nose haha seems like the right thing to do lol
RedNex 2008-03-16 ch 13,	abusenice chap! its true, reporters are pure crap
RedNex 2008-03-09 ch 6,	abuseooh! cute cute! love it! your an extremely talented writer! keep goin!
Dark-Angels-Tears (Lazy!) 2008-03-04 ch 12, anon.	abuseo-o Sorryz I haszn't reviewed in a while. Had some stuffz going on in my life. Important. Life changing. And very very strange. Aneyways, I LUFF j00r CHAPTERS! AND SONGUS! AND EVEREHTHANG! Just seems a little strange to me that Sue just wakes up in a hospital and stands up and everone's like ':O SUE! ONG! WER SO GLAD UR LYK OKZ!' when no doctor has taken a look at her or anything. They should be breaking down the doorz. Aneywayz. Chappie title suggestion tis all, because I know that's what's your songus revolves around. What to pick? What to pick? I really like 'World of Hurt' for a vengeance-type chapter. And it can be all elemental/enviromental themed... like, 'I'm a blazing inferno, I'm an immovable mountain, I'm an unstoppable storm, I'm a raging cyclone- and you're in for a world of hurt.' Dunno. Maybe I'm all geeky like that. ^_^;; Another I like is 'What if?' And that can be taken anywhere. More: 'Hush' For a quieter (XD) chapter, softer, moe sentimental 'Rock my World' For some big event.. 'Silent Symphony' if you're headed towards a death or serious injury... or just something cute and sad 'Ever After' It's cliche, I know, but take it in a new direction and it could be cool. For an ending-type song. 'Better Off Dead' For ANYTHING horrifically angsty. :D So there you go. I plumbed the depths of mah brainz for yuu. If you doesn't take them, I'm gonna write them, so hurreh up! XD -waitz eagerly for new chapz-
marvelousmariaah 2008-03-03 ch 12,	abuseyay thankyu for not killing them! i cant believe there are only 3 chapters left, im gonna cry.
Rose of Hope 2008-03-03 ch 12,	abusereally cute and sad. I loved it. Really great job.
RedNex 2008-03-03 ch 12,	abusecool chap, what if u naed it... Hidden Talents Mind, Body and Soul Dig Deeper (i know they all suck im bad it titles but i figured id list anyway! lol)

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