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Sam Buca
2009-11-11 . chapter 10
Great story! I guess the Colonials are in for it now. Firing nuclear weapons at Earth means that they surrender or die. I would love to see a story about the annihilation of the CDF, the conquest of the twelve colonies and the total suppression of their religions.
SuperN-Gaspard
2009-10-13 . chapter 10
This is an amazing story and I loved reading it. All the scenes were well written and the battles very enjoyable. The only thing making me sad is what happened to the Race transport ships that the Colonials attacked. The Race may have a superiority complex and ignorant to many things around them but I have grown to like them for being so funny.

SuperN
SuperN-Gaspard
2009-10-13 . chapter 2
I have to say this story so far is hilarious.

SuperN
Dracco
2009-09-27 . chapter 9
So... (when) are you planning on writing a sequal?
Admiral Duff
2009-08-23 . chapter 10
This was cool I love it
Admiral Duff
2009-08-17 . chapter 1
Wow very well written. Good Chap.
david
2009-08-15 . chapter 10
great story, can't wait for part two. Two seggestions, one use Cylon tecknology to build a giant SGC base on the dark side of Earths' moon. Second use Tokr'a crystals to build the human compound,(like the one in stargate continum) on Home II. That should impress both the Cylons and the Race.
Guardian54
2009-08-14 . chapter 10
Oh wow...

When's the sequel? *drools over the idea*
JC
2009-07-26 . chapter 10
Good to known this story is over now.

#I hope you will Go back and End A thin Veneer and update Another Perspective,they are your two best story.
skipper 1337
2009-07-13 . chapter 10
Look, this truly is a very nice story and all, and I immensly enjoyed it, but now that you`ve started a Colonial/Tau`ri war, and also added a massive amount of new information about theTau`ri fleet and it`s strength, well... I`d really like to know about first contact between the Tau`ri and the Colonials and how they found out about the Goa`uld (well of cours Daniel probably told them) but how can they still think that the Goaùld are a threat? Didn`t the Tau`ri tell them of the defeat of them, and are they even defeated, for you imply that this may not be the case, though I think that you might have meant the Wraith instead, as I cannot imagine a obvious scenario playing out after season 10 and the Goaùld still at large. Anyway answer my queestions with a story!
Please!!
Hat O' Doom
2009-07-10 . chapter 10
Great story!
JovianJeff
2009-07-08 . chapter 10
OMG you know how to invoke feelings with your writing! The highs were incredible, especially with the carefully built up tension that made it nearly edge of the seat reading. Using the veiwpoints of the Race as they were saved by the Hammond was an excellent way to present it, in fact I thought it was a brilliant move to keep the point of view of the SGC characters minimal and letting the reactions of the others set the scene and bring to life the roller coaster ride of emotivity desired (at least presumed desired). The weariness and relief in the aftermath of the battle was nearly palatable.

As superior as the Tau'ri had been to the Colonials it was interesting to see the Colonials to the Race. A rather horrific 'first encounter' that was also well done and I say horrific not in how it was written of course, but in how it conveyed how much overkill was used in something as 'simple' as a boarding. One not intentional, but assumptions were made and lives were lost. It was good to see it wasn't done maliciously, an unintentional hamhanded way of trying to get information. It was also in keeping with the attitudes the Colonials have consistently shown of if its not like us it doesn't matter.

Wrapping up things with the conversation was a great decrescendo that made the approaching end feel like it arrived naturally instead of abruptly and it well could have as there is so much more that could have been said. Yet this was a good place to stop. Thank you for this magnificient tale.
Reagan
2009-07-05 . chapter 10
Yay, Albert. I got my huge space battle. Thank you for the final update and overall great read. Although I know it is not your intention I hope to see you write more Stargate soon, even if it will be something completely different. Either way I enjoyed this. Thank you.
Life of Nemo
2009-07-04 . chapter 10
awesome
best crossover ever
madbrad
2009-07-03 . chapter 10
Wow, quite a ride! The Race and SG1 were innovative enough, but when you suddenly threw in BSG I didn't quite know what was happening. As it is you've plainly shown that the Colonials are going to try again one day to blow the Earth out of space. Exciting story!
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