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| sephora85 2008-07-22 ch 22,  | abuseWonderful chapter! I hope you'll be able to update soon! |
| Secret Memory 2008-07-21 ch 22, | abuseThat was a nice chapter. |
| siriusblack992 2008-07-20 ch 22, | abusegood chapter!! |
| His Half Blood Princess 2008-07-20 ch 22, | abuseThis was fantastic! I saw a little of the Pretty Woman reference in there - I loved it. It was perfect! |
| BaileyElaine19 2008-06-25 ch 21, | abuseThis is an amazing story! I am so glad that Severus is finally giving her a chance! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Ashes Falling 2008-06-23 ch 21, | abuseThe whoel competing with Lily thing and her ghost hanging over her shoulder is something I am familiar with. Poor Allison. Seriously. That is a horrible thing, knowing that someone loves a ghost more than you. Why are we so mean to our characters? Anyway, nice way of handling it. I loved the scene in the phone booth a lot. It made me laugh. I could see that happening. It's happened to me, actually, perhaps that is why I like it so. |
| Rin07 2008-06-23 ch 21, | abuseWOW! Really good chapter! I can't wait to read the next one. |
| The Queen of Confusion 2008-06-23 ch 21, | abuseGreat chapter! Hope to see more soon! SARAH |
| sephora85 2008-06-23 ch 21, | abuseI loved the last part.It seems Severus is willing to give it a try! I wonder if Allison gets a new wand if she decides to marry Severus...I hope you update soon! |
| siriusblack992 2008-06-22 ch 21, | abusethat was a nice chapter! |
| Brown Eyed Girl 75 2008-06-22 ch 21, anon. | abuseI am here! LOL. Wow, way out of my genre, huh? I so enjoy your story. It is indeed the only Harry Potter fan fic I read (any good ones you can recommend, sorry peeps, I am new to this area)and you got me onto the books now. So thanks for expanding my horizons. It was beautiful written and intrgiquing and I am looking forward to more. |
| jada951 2008-06-21 ch 21, | abusewow! someone actually willing to give up magic because of the marriage law. now if they all did that, they would ahve to repeal it, no? at least you let the 2 acknowledge the discomfort they felt,and it wasn't like"oh, severus, i have always wanted you, you greasy git!" ;-) |
| Ashes Falling 2008-06-14 ch 20, | abuseSorry I've been gone for a long time, but I've had loads of family stuff to deal with. I'm back now, though. "Perhaps it was because he knew he was in love with her, and still too stubborn to admit it."--that was great. i don't know why, but I laughed and nodded. He is quite stubborn. Also, I really liked this line--"He may have been a Death Eater, may have killed, may have raped, may have destroyed lives at the hands of a madman, for an ideal that was simply impossible to achieve" because a lot of people tend to pretend Snape never did any of these things. Anyway, I really like the ending, it made me gasp, and now I'm at a loss for what will happen next. Poor Allison. I really hope she finds a way to get back into the magical world, but if not, I'm sure you'll manage to make it good. :) |
| The Queen of Confusion 2008-06-08 ch 20, | abuseWho is that? Is it Severus? Great chapter! Hope to see more soon! SARAH |
| siriusblack992 2008-06-04 ch 20, | abuseI never realized that this story exsisted..lol i really like this story i alwaya like reading snape/oc!! I do have one question does she love sev or not? i was a bit confused on that! anyways update soon... |