Uh, another chapter, please? (trying to conceal hair-ripping)

(*sob*) Fang's dead! NO! Never ever ever do that to Fang! Oh, wait, this is only Max's worries. Man, her dreams seem so real! Must be your writing. :) Well, lovely oneshot, were you not able to sleep again?

*sniff* This is very good. I like the song and the imagery is very nice. The only thing that I would recommend is clarifying the part where she envisions Fang dead- you can't really tell if he is dead or if she's only thinking that he might be. Also, if you have the time, I'd appreciate it if you could check out my first fic, Until the End of the World. Thanks, and again, great job with this!

aw poor max...

sniff, sniff.