*chuckles* nice. now if riddick could destroy more bitchy mary sues that way. at least if i made a possible match for him she would be worthy of a place in the story.

Thank god someone gets it!

I love the fact that you killed mary sue, she obviously deserved it. But someone like kyra( no matter what anyone says, is not a cannon sue)has her own issues, just not with death because she has survived him. She feels that he wouldn't go through with it. What classifies her as a non cue character is the fact the she succumbs to the Necros and gets herself killed. So basically your fic suits Eve Logan the female merc on Toombs' skittish new crew.

Although you can't see it, I'm smiling right now. What you say is very true, and I'm sick of everyone making it seem as though a killer's threat is a pick up line.

Brava!

Why does the Riddick fandom suffer from the Mary-Sue-itis so badly? Oh yeah, Kyra canon-Sue, never mind. I'm so afraid of female characters in this fandom, it's not funny.

So alas, I'll have my Riddick with a side of Vaako from now on. (

Anyways, ha. I only wish this would be a required read before writing any Riddick fiction.

great fun! troath throat? the lack of quotation marks was weird, but I really liked the send up.

Hahaha lol luv this, so funny serves her right

A very happy-making story for all of us that loathe Mary Sue.

LOL that was awesome. xD A mary-sue finally killed! xD. I know that I have probably done this before when I didn't really know how not to make one, but after reading a few mary-sue stories, then re-reading a few that I've written down (a ton on paper started, but not finished *sweatdrop*) I re-read my stories and compared them. It seems I did the beauty part of a mary-sue, but not necessarily the rest of it *thank god*. xD *reads the story once more.* yeah. I would have walked out of the alleyway or wandered a bit more until I could find my way out. Not talked to some random guy in an alleyway. *shakes head and rolls eyes*

I like it. Mary Sues always seem to warp reality around them. I like it when the canon characters don't get warped.

completely agree with you!

nice lol

i think this was great i actually probably did this with out realizing it probably, i'll be looking at my story's later and freak lol any way i got a kick out of this.

bwahahaha!

die Mary-Sue!

:D