Very nice! And I love both L and V which is surprising to see a poem devoted for them... Now I'm think of writing a song for V lol

sob hic hic Very appropriate. 11-5 is one of the best days [and worst]. hug The only thing I don't like is the 'wish i could kill them' part because your writing would suffer if you deathnoted people because deathnoters are overshaodwed by death [literal/figuaral] and like Light's Dad everyone would be just a little better off if the deathnotes did not exist... But I agree, too, bastards like Creedy...Prothero...UGH. My sking crawls just thinking about them three. And High Chancellor Adam Sutler, who promised you order, promised you peace, and all he gives in return is bullying, an off-center mustache, and a horrible temper. [Not mentioning how absolutely ugly his nose is or how his ear twitches when he shouts...ew]

I wonder though...would V and L like the fact they are in the same poem..?

I mean, L's a detective who tries to find a mass murderer dispensing personal justice...

and V's a knife-wielding freedom fighting terrorist despensing personal justice against those who have wronged him and humanity...

Oh, the INSANITY!

But, then again, V's lair might be underneath L's high-rise paradise. Line up the rain/roof scenes - ta da!

awsome poem, totally cool. I loved it. thanxs for your writing.

really cool poem. its reallt really nice

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