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Anonymous
2009-12-01 . chapter 66
You've got me hooked.
But, as I was reading it I noticed that the chapters didnt correspond to the number of posts.
Like "66. Chapter 70: Predictions"
I checked back, and it turns out you've missed chapters 18 to 21, which is between points 17 and 18 D:

But thats a small and insignificant detail.. I <3 Your fic.
Satou Kimura
2009-11-29 . chapter 106
i think tht to have the original maunders reunite in the form of their children is good. no, more like pwanage.
i can see all the planning (four yrs was it?) tht was put into this and god it was worth it.
each chapter is adequate in length and essential to the plot, on levels of entertainment and well, plot-wise.

j.k. rowlings is genius, but

u are simply ingenious.

(haha simply ingenious, oxymoron)

i love ur writng style, and having it develop over the course of the story gets us into it, and also, it grows up with Helen. it was a bittersweet ending, but... hey thts life.

hope sirius and helen live together in heaven, with james and lily as their neighbor, lol. maybe dumbledore as well.

KiMu~
meowdie
2009-11-27 . chapter 88
absolutely amazing
i am totally captivated :)
RamenRaven
2009-11-23 . chapter 1
Hey. Wouldn't Anka have visited hogwarts during the TriWizard Tournament? The whole delegation at Beauxbatons went to the school that year. Just a thought I had. I love you stories so much! Thank you for writing an updating. :D
moonlit.nocturne
2009-11-21 . chapter 108
strange, you have two chapters of the same thing. >_<

I have mixed feelings about this chapter. While I'm glad there was some sort of happiness in the ending, I must side with you in that I don't like Heaven scenes. Let the dead remain dead...haha.
But it's really okay, it's not like I hated it. I liked it more than I disliked it. I'm sorry if I'm not making any sense. I'm a bit out of it right now. :P

I shall Story(Alert) in case you choose to add another chapter anytime! :)

Love, m.n
sarieva
2009-11-20 . chapter 108
<3 I'm glad they're together again. SORRY I'VE BEEN SO ABSENT, real life is busy.

But I want to cry because of Marina. Even though this epilogue was fantastic.
BriannaLisaJarzembowskaMac7
2009-11-19 . chapter 108
Well I am happy. I know you really didn't want to write this but hey my life sucks right now and to know that heaven is a great place and love will find a way it is great. I was crying over this story and my friends and teachers didn't know what was wrong and when i explained it to one of my friends they thought i was crazy. So forgive me. BUT I AM HAPY>
The Falling Moon
2009-11-19 . chapter 107
wow you gave us the ending, you gave us the hope, the happyness that you have been repressing for what is it now a year and a half. Oh wow, i'm so glad you wrote this, it doesn't diminish the sadness of their lives, or the horrors of their past it just brings light to it with something a little better, okay a lot better. It's amazing, i'm just so glad i read it, and i wish you had posted it before. A lot of us could have used this, when TGM ended it might have been the most heartbreaking experience of my life and i suppose it must have been even worse for you. Really great.
unlock.your.heart
2009-11-19 . chapter 108
I have seen many a reunion stories, but I've enjoyed yours the most. I'm one of those people who root for the happy ending but appreciate the sad ones.

Really awesome.
Saciice
2009-11-18 . chapter 107
Briliant :) A bit fluffy but in a good way. I know you're going to be offended but it kinda reminded me of the end of New Moon when Bella wouldn't believe Edward had come back and thought he was a dream.

Don't hit me.

Anyway, I like this kind of epiogue of sorts, I like the confirmation that they are happy now. And then when they are old and wrinkled, Harry and Anka will join them. Honestly I can't wait for them all to die so they'll be a happy family again. But It's going to be mad when all of the Weasley kids and their kids die and they are all there in heaven forever. It'll be such a big ranga family.

:D

Love Sarah
lindsay51270
2009-11-18 . chapter 108
Wow. I saw the notice that there was another chapter and figured it was just an accident but now I'm so glad that I clicked the link. That was just unbelievable. The perfect companion. I've always liked the way that you ended the story because it was so real and honest but this just kind of adds to that and ties everything together so that readers feel a sense of completion. I really love it. It's not like VVM where you read it and love it but its just not the same because the circumstances are so different from TGM that you lose that harsh reality. This was an awesome way to tie everything together and just give a nice picture of what could be a happy ending. As much as I love "The Good Morrow" (and trust me, I do), Helen and Sirius always make me think of a part from Donne's poem "A Valediction Forbidding Mourning" that he wrote for his wife when he went to France and he says:

"Our two souls therefore, which are one,
Though I must go, endure not yet
A breach, but an expansion,
Like gold to airy thinness beat.

If they be two, they are two so
As stiff twin compasses are two;
Thy soul, the fix'd foot, makes no show
To move, but doth, if the' other do."

Those lines have always really made me think of Helen and Sirius's relationship because it's true that their souls are really connected. Haha anyway, enough of my rant. This was fantastic and I love it. I hope writing it was a nice break from you post-exam partying.
Much love,
-L
Lily Swan
2009-11-15 . chapter 72
Heyys!

I shall review properly again soon, but before I do, I've got to say this:

‘Kill Maera,’ - THAT had me laughing my head off. Bwhaha, that was hilarious. My sister just came in, red faaced frmo playing her flute too much, and informing me to shut up :p

And yes, I am indeed reading this brilliant fic of yours instead of doing my Taming of the Shrew English essay. 'Tis much more amusing :)

Oh, wait, wait! Helen is a decendent from cirec (as mentioned, many moons ago - but I couldn't review due to an FF fault) Andd... I SAID she was a pure blood, didn't I? I knew she was, knew it! ... EH? EH?!

*grins smugly*

Ah, I'm a genius.

Lily - who'll review (properly) again soon! :)
moonlit.nocturne
2009-11-12 . chapter 34
i have to leave a random review in order to add this story to my favorites. :)
gracieeeXD
2009-11-11 . chapter 106
WOW.
This is by far the best story I have read in a while.
My heart is constricted right now from the ending.
I read the whole story in about a week, due to the fact that i could stay up on the computer.
BUT, this made me laugh, cry, smile, cheer and make me cherish my life and what I have right now:]
I'm sad its over, and that Sirius and Helen never got together, officially. But it had a great message and Your a wonderful writer and this book is going on my favorites list immediately.
ehjayMAHdjhay
2009-11-10 . chapter 107
This is by far the longest FF iv ever read.. And it was awesome!! However i was wondering if ul consider doing a sequel.. As in one about hannah and the other children.. But then again ur the author..
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